The Bully's Mate Avis

Loving it 😍. It is keeping my attention. And I don't want to put it down. Can not wait to keep reading and find out what is going to happen. I've got my mom and cousin hooked on this novel as well. Keep up the amazing job. I can't wait to read wait the king I'd going to think about ebony being his daughter. And if that is going to cause problems between her and Keith. Only time will tell

The story is good so far. The flow and progression are fine. There are some grammatical errors that annoy me, and other areas that sound like they were written by AI. Other than that, the story is good. Typical bully/ fated mates back story, but with a few unique twists so far. I'm glad the fmc didn't just accept his remorse for past behavior and actually expects him to earn her forgiveness. I do hope the author spends more time proof reading before submitting future chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next.

At first I thought that this novel always typical romances novel I have read. About paranormal, political and so on. I hate Ebony mother for not taking good care of her and never feel sorry or ashamed for what she doing to her. Ebony was alone struggle. As for Keith "the bully mate" here..he's the worse at first. But after he found that they were destined together, I'm relieved that he show her how wonderful love and family is. The way he protect her..I'm really love it. ..to be continued cause my reading still ongoing.

It is starting to get better but, it was slow to start. A little more storyline, more focus on building the storyline and less on their relationship. Needs more meat to the story if you will. The characters are developing nicely now but, there still needs to be more to the whole makeup. It's bordering on being to blah! More details for the characters as well as the story as a whole is desperately needed to pull this story together. Otherwise, it's pretty decent.

So far so good!! Its a great read. I love my poor Ebony, poor thing has been through so much and is still willing to give her mate a chance at happiness and a relationship. The surprise of who she really is, was a kicker!! Shocked was an understatement. She deserves all the happiness in the world. Her mother is a trash bag. I hope Keith can pull his crap together so they can truly can be happy. I can't wait to read more and see what else this great book has to offer. ❤️

I LOVE THIS BOOK SO FAR IT HAS TURNS AND TWISTERS. I LOVETHE CHARACTERS. LOVE THE WAY KEITH PARENTS ACT TOWARDS EBONY THR LOVE THEY ARE GIVING HER. SHE IS GETTING A SECOND CHANCE AT HAVING THE LOVING FAMILY SHE DID NOT GET WITH HER MOM. I HATED HOW EBONYS MOM TREATED HER LIKE SHE WAW NOTHING LIKE SHE WAS NOT WORTH ANY LOVE ANY AFECCTION. I KNOW KEITH IS TRAYNG HIS BEST TO BECOME A BETTER MATE FOR HER

This is truly an Amazing story I am hooked on it. I am hoping in the next chapter there will be scenes where he is the jealous one and she has to calm or reassure him because we definitely need more of those scenes. I love how she has raven now to also help out, oh an mark is a complete idiot for his thoughts but let’s be real we all knew that was stupid for him to believe that would work to get her to talk but some men need to learn the hard way on how to treat their loves

Honestly started off a little strange, but I like how the relationship is transiting. Just wish people can go back to fully describing character features like they used to. I really hope (but know obviously) that everything works out well for the. I would like to see a little bit more personal things / time spent between them, but I am guessing that is coming up soon. What happened at the pack meeting though, feel like it was kind of redundant since people still treat her however they want.... Let's see

In love. Fastnat Helt för denna bok. Synd att det går långsamt att samla ihop coins så man kan läsa vidare på boken men det är värt väntan varje dag. Helt fantastiskt bra skrivit av författaren och man behöver inte vänta på nya kapitel när man är ny läsare då dom kommit så långt i den. Nu blir det att återgå till läsningen så man ser vad som händer och om information om hennes pappa stämmer med vad hennes mamma sagt 😍

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