The Alpha King’s Secret Heir Avis

So sad the way the writer keeps telling the same thing what happens but with different people. It makes the storyline confusing and ruins what could have been a good story. I hope it is because it was the writers first story. If not too bad because the story is ruined by the way everything keeping repeating itself. To many coins for keeping us to read the same thing so many times. I sounds like the writer needed to fill in more word 😞

This book began good but floundered after they moved into the palace. The constant 'like a' statements, broken sentences which didn't help to explain the events that were being talked about; the story took a downward spiral that I wasn't expecting. They were some really good parts but I wish it was enough to recover the story line, I was holding out hope. I did love the relationship began Thorne and Elara and the little comedian they created. I loved Thorne's unrelenting desire to bring his mate and son home, also how he was ready to do any and everything to keep them safe.

Dissatisfaction! disappointed! disbelief! It started well but then declined—for me. I felt disconnected while like I was reading a feel different books in one. There were too many repeated words, pages and just felt disjointed overall. Is thee e book 2–because the way this ended has me completely floored. The last page has Alara sending a text then when I flipped those message popped up that I have completed the story—how. Yeah, it’s too bad, even not so great should have a proper ending.

It started out very intriguing, I was enjoying it until the author started to "wax poetic." I skipped so many pages because it was the same as the previous 10. I was so glad I finally finished it. It was that annoying by the end. Get over yourself. Stick to just story telling and stop trying to impress people with what you consider clever words play. Now it won't let me post this review. I can't believe I paid to finish this.

This was a fantastic read. I could barely get anything done in my life because I was so focused on reading the book. I loved Aeron. Such an adorable little kid, he was a little unrealistic as well as how everyone took to him, unless that was supposed to be his "princely energy" because he will one day be the next Alpha King, but if that was the intention the author really needed to either outright say that or allude to it. I think she did at one point but I can't be sure. I love the twins (who wouldn't?) And Julian. Is the next book going to be Julian's? I had difficulty telling what direction the author was intending him to go, I also had difficulty knowing who Caius preferred or if he liked both men and women. But it will be interesting to see where the author goes from here. Especially since Caius just being Caius made the flight attendant sigh everytime she walked by (unless it was irritation). And the twins are in Crescent for more than moral support... They're there for their stories (I hope).

Great characters you can’t help but love! A little repetitive but the story on a whole is quite captivating in my opinion. It may need an edit? Around near chapter 35 there was meant to be a first wave of war but there was a duplication of the second wave unfortunately so it felt a little clunky at that point. I love reading this story so much… I don’t know what I shall do once I finally finish it! I am already considering re-reading it 😂 UPDATE: finished reading it. Sad it’s over especially because it didn’t end neatly. It feels like another book is coming. Can’t wait

Chapters too short, coins cost too much.Good story. I will look for more books by this author.54 or more chapters and it cost too much in comparison to kindle books. The cost of coins is too high just like some the other services.The chapters of the book hold be more along the lines of maybe 25-30, chapters like a normal novel.I’m not sure if Im keeping this service or canceling subscription. I hope this helps.

Good writing but it’s ended with a cliff-hanger. I enjoyed all the characters, particularly Thorne and Elara and wanted to,have a proper ending of the book. I’m guessing there will be a sequel? My main issue is the cost of reading these books. I can get better quality reading for free with my Kindle membership and I hope authors realise that you are ripping off your readers. Find a better way of publishing and your readership will grow exponentially.

This book lost the plot around chapter 43. It's like someone else took over writing it - likely AI- & didn't bother reading the previous chapters. She had a wolf, then she didn't, then she did again, with no explanation as to why that very obvious mistake was made. Where are the other packs? The conflict between Valemont & Ashthorne just disappeared. No other packs ever showed up, either in support or against what was happening. It's like they just stopped existing. Then the tone completely changed, things became repetitive, random words were highlighted, baby talk became ever more prominent & ridiculous, & suddenly, after all this time, the 2 main chars just go at it like rabbits, out of the blue, in a total 180 of their relationship with no build up, rhyme or reason to it. Having to pay to unlock an 'author's note' around chapter 12 was a greedy money grab. Waste of time & money.

Loved this but wanted more of a love story with them! But would read it again!!! Great story! The characters were rich and developed but I wanted more of a love story between Elara and Thorne… possibly to even see them mated and to see what became of her former lover. I hope there is definitely more to come for this book and author or maybe another book that gives us the ending of how the war went and the romance!!!! Such a great read!!! Otherwise it grabs your attention