Rejected While Pregnant: Claimed by the Direwolf Alpha Avis

I am not sure if the author is forgetting what they are writing, but the story keeps changing and things that have already happened repeat out of nowhere. The last five chapters were the same thing over and over. There needs to be some better proofreading or editing with how much money we spend to unlock each chapter. It reads like a five-year-old wrote it and the plot needs to move on a bit. Maybe it was written by AI

Good so far except for the discrepancies. The author should keep a cheat sheet with important information next to her when she v reads. I like the characters because the are realistic, but the characters need to give better descriptions of mystical information for example, the sisters mentioned that the kid or baby growing in the FL belly has a different father than the biological father. What in the world does that mean. Stuff like that is why I didn't give this the top ranking.

The novel is a mixture of suspense and it makes you want to keep reading it to find out what is going to happen. Sometimes the chapters are quite high compared to other novels I have read but I am enjoying it regardless and will keep reading till the end to find out what happens. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes an easy read with a good storyline Thank you for writing this book and I look forward to the second half.

Very interesting read. The story keeps you entertained and glued on it. I keep going to know what happened next. This is one of those novels that I want to read to the end🌈I love the resilience of Aria. But I will prefere she gives herself opportunity to love and be loved again. She needs to believe in herself more. I would like to seel the alfa eat his own words when he realized he lost the perfect mate. 👌

I am enjoying the story line. It appears some of the chapters are mixed up. In one the FMC has found her wolf and then several chapters later she hasn't. It is almost like the author started on one story line and then abandoned it and went a different route. The whole story needs a good editor. Again I love the story, just needs tuning. I hope Jasper dies goes to hell where he has to continuously watch his rejected mate and child happiness.

The story initially grabbed my attention with an intriguing premise and well-developed characters, but now it seems to be progressing at a much slower pace than I expected. I find myself eagerly turning the pages, waiting chapter by chapter to see when the plot will finally pick up momentum. I really hope the narrative shifts soon because I don't want to continue reading through repetitive elements without significant developments. The anticipation is growing, and I hope it leads to some exciting twists in the near future.

This novel was excellent. Even with the few continuity errors I noticed. The story moves forward easily and pulls you in. The tension at times is fe lt through the well worded verses. It would be interesting to have a sequel for the hybrid's story or reign and growth, unifying vampire, werewolf and direwolf. Also a parallel story of Loir prior to meeting Lucian, to see the road that shaped him also. A prequel of the lead up to the Vampire-Werewolf War would also de interesting.

I feel like this was a good time to end the story. I enjoyed the book and recommend it to anyone who is interested in reading it. It was a good read for the story. There were parts that I really wish had better explained the story more thoroughly but it wasn’t meant to be. Still I enjoyed reading it and would recommend it to others who have been watching and reading the story. Thanks for sharing it with me.

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Very interesting story line. All the different bloodlines coming together after three centuries of fighting was very interesting and fascinating. The story of each bloodline was quite complete and lent a realism to the whole story. Lucian and Lori’s relationship was so well written and became part of the entire journey to a better world. Enjoyed reading it although I think the price is almost as much as a normal book. I will be reading more of these books.