Hiding the Alpha's Heir Avis

Like the storyline. The grammar and sentence build isn’t great but yeah. The male main character might be a little too aggressive but he kind of just reminds me of the beast of beauty and the beast, so I excuse a lot of his behavior haha. The female main character can’t seem to make up her mind, I understand it’s an emotional and confusing situation, but maybe the story needs a bit more depth to it to really feel it.

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I think it’s a great book. Of course there’s some grammatical mistakes that could have been addressed using a site like grammarly or something. I like how the book flows. It’s definitely a different point of view and time period. I just wish at certain point you had to buy points to read it’s ridiculous which isn’t the authors fault but still irritating to me. So overall a good read so far to me at least

Good novel but she is so difficult to deal with sometimes. She needs to give him an opportunity to explain himself. Pup makes me laugh at times but I understand why he does what he does at times. Very protective of his mother but still very strong. Alpha is strange and very sweet at times but he knows he did wrong. Hopefully they will work out their problems so that they can be a true and loving family for pups sake.