Fire Wolf Series Avis

I love the storyline, but the lack of appropriate Grammer throws me off. For example using ain't instead of isn't. I would advise the author to have some one who is fluent in English to proofread and correct the manuscript before submitting it for publication on this site. However, I have only praise for the plot and the story line. I do have however sometimes have difficulty when the characters shift. For instance the chapter ends when the thought has not been conveyed to the reader!