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I hope that's not the actual ending. The story is great, lots of unexpected plot twists, turns and suspense with some drama thrown in. Very much enjoyed reading, at times I was so hooked that I just had to read the next chapter immediately and let the dishes soak a little while longer. I'll be very disappointed if the story ends in the warehouse like that, but it leaves the door open for future chapters or a part 2 story. Definitely interested in reading more stories from this writer.

There were many gaps in the story and the ending felt unfinished. Early in the story they flew to California but then they were back in New York, just one example of inconsistency. Why the story ended the way it did makes no sense. Also it seems like there was more than one author writing the book. The treatment of the bullet wound seemed excessive, weeks for a flesh wound to heal is not medically appropriate. Elena putting up with Damian for 12 years is a bit far-fetched. It made her seem stupid and gullible.

Book Review: Mr. Hawthorne, I Already Married Your Rival Mr. Hawthorne, I Already Married Your Rival is an intriguing romance filled with drama, unexpected twists, and emotional tension. The story explores love, betrayal, and the consequences of underestimating someone’s worth. The characters make the plot engaging, while the romantic rivalry keeps readers curious about what will happen next. It is an entertaining read for fans of dramatic love stories, strong characters, and satisfying relationship developments. Overall, this story offers an enjoyable escape into romance and revenge.