The Billionaire's Substitute Bride Avis

Nice start, but was let down by the end. Throughout the story we really only got one point of view and it was that of Mia. Allen was lost in the shuffle. We only got to read his thoughts three or four times throughout FORTY SEVEN chapters! Him being one of the main characters makes that reality a letdown. The plot seemed to have split, which is fine. However the climax to them was rushed and lacking. Then ending was a wanna-be cliffhanger, but ended up being more like a dud. There was too much of this story that needed to be told and it left the reader flat.

It was a great novel…. Suspense & romance all rolled into one! Kept you guessing until the end! I give it five stars! I would recommend to anyone who enjoyed reading romance, suspense or both! Keep sending more like this and I’m sure I will keep reading them! Will recommend to friends and family for some feel good enjoyment, especially on a relaxing day! You should not tell people how many words they need to write in their review though! It’s something that should be the readers choice! Thanks for a great read!

Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book. Good story some typos. Slow start quick ending. Overall a good book.

Not a bad read, I would have preferred certain turn of events to be different, but it wasn’t too bad. I like that it wasn’t one of those long drawn out stories, and I truly loved how they eventually fell in love. I was hoping it would have liked if Kara and Austin, ended up together or something of the sort, and I feel like sometimes there were some parts where the author could have focused on certain things a bit more.

The storyline from the beginning before taking a turn of involving Kara was beautiful. The part where Kara in now lying to Red or threghthening Red doesn't make sense at all. If she was feeling lonely then why update Red's aunt about her progress, it doesn't sound right rather she has been jealous. If you want to protect the person you love, you wont hurt her. There are things that can still be rectified in the book in order to reach class A

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Quite a sweet story of fake marriage and finding love and also betrayal. Nice length and able to read in one day, prob ably an after noon if doing nothing else. 🙂🙂🙂 Not sure what else to write - 80 words is too much for a minimum review. * * * * * Love triangle and squares and poor girl finds rich husband. * * * * * Keep reading until the end and enjoy* * * * * *

This is a very short story only about 40 something chapters it started strong and was consistent it didn’t get repetitive and loved the main characters and most of the others too it flowed and was easy to read but there were large gaps between sentences and paragraphs which made it annoying to read through and also I was a little disappointed although it started off and the middle was well paced and moved but the ending was so rushed that it climaxed and then suddenly in the last two chapters ended.

A story that didn’t drag on for hundreds of chapters. Didn’t repeat the same thing over and over. An enjoyable read. Would definitely recommend. Not sure if it was just me, but be prepared for some formatting issues in the last chapter. One of the pages was very difficult to read the beginning of. Otherwise, well done. Might even read it again one day. Too bad there isn’t a way for the cat tax to be paid. Bella sounds cute.

Good novel I must say i was looking for a slower ending. I had a feeling that it was Kara. Red was too naive for me. I get that you trust your bestie but dang her actions and words were sus. Like my son says, Allen didn't stay long enough he should have lingered at Kara apartment. Im glad that Allen hates cheaters he lucky she didn't leave him even though he got caught cheating with his ex Sophia