Reborn to Ruin Him: The Heiress's Game Avis

This novel is built around an unusual and intriguing concept that took a little time to adjust to, but ultimately proved highly effective. The story has a distinct “sliding doors” quality, exploring multiple possible outcomes before the right path gradually emerges. I found this approach engaging and rewarding, particularly as the various threads came together in a satisfying conclusion. The novel is also well paced, with just the right amount of detail to keep the reader invested throughout. It maintained my interest from beginning to end without feeling rushed or unnecessarily drawn out, making for an enjoyable and memorable read.

At times this book was hard to follow, hard to keep up with the different storylines and characters. It did show all the different variables of the deceit, and betrayal of each character and left the reader wondering what is going to happen next. At times I felt like putting the book down and not finishing it but I kept getting drawn back, I couldn’t help wondering what was happening next. Keep writing and growing your talent. I look forward to reading your next book.

Love it so glad it all turned out for the. Again I hate that I have to write 80 words just to leave one review. This need to change or I will not leave any after this. Again author you did a beautiful job, and will look for other stories that you have written. Don't have anything else to write so anything after this is just to get to where I need it to be. Sorry. Nope no more words.

I love reading novels. Just hate the cost. Each chapter shouldn't be just a paragraph long. The cost more than what you can get free per day for just one chapter is outrageous as well. You wind up taking more time watching adds than reading. The sad fact most adds are just more apps they want you to download for books they don't have in their app is horrible. I wonder how long it will take to finish this one book before I just delete the app?

The story didn't make sense. Would go one way then change it living in redo. The story reasoning for different acts fell short. Like when she found out about her godfather, it was like whatever. Louis relationship isn't really explained to any level of understanding. I thought Kelvin was in love with her. Wanted her for himself. Then all of a sudden what?The ending fell short. The final ending was sweet reward for the reader. Love over comes all, I guess

I liked the story but found that it needed more proofreading as there were mistakes and inconsistencies through. I had to reread sentences a few times for it to make sense. I was really happy that Lyra and Vincent had a love that was real and that they got their happy ending. I also felt that the end was a little rushed. It would have been nice to see Louis get a happy ending. His ending just seemed lonely as he became the heir but was all alone😔

This story was alright. It got confusing and crazy at certain points. Overall, it was entertaining. I mean I don’t know why Jason and Vanessa got away with so much. It seemed like they would have been arrested when they held her prisoner in her home. Vanessa should have been charged with attempted murder and still they got away. The cops were there and didn’t do anything. Then Lyra was stupid at times and fell into trap after trap. Annoying

I loved this story and glad it had a happy ending with Lyra and Vincent together and their daughter. It was good to see everyone who hurt Lyra and killed her at some point got what they had coming to them. Jason and supposedly her best friend Vanessa and his mother and sister were terrible people in mistreating Lyra especially with all she had done for all of them. Chairman Ward pretended to act like he cared but didn't and Emma was betraying her with the worst of them all which is Kelvin who thought himself untouchable and was manipulating and pulling the strings with them all. Kelvin and his Mother and Louis stepmother were the worst of the bunch got what they had coming and I am happy Kelvin couldn't be reborn again. I am glad Louis inherited everything and I hope he finds love. I loved the ending for everyone. ❤👍

This novel is convoluted to say the least. One goes from one extreme to another and it's a little hard to follow but it does keep me wanting to know what happens next. It has so many bad people and sometimes it's hard to figure out what they are going to do next. I'm going to keep reading and hopefully Lyra will end up with someone who loves her and can protect her from the people who only have evil intentions.

I am really liking this novel. Not even halfway but I can not stop reading. The way there is a left turn almost every chapter is impressive for a unknown writer in this day and age. There does seem to be a problem with the layout though, every now and then a sentence is cut short and in other situations the sentence or even sentences are repeated into a new paragraph. If those problems were resolved it would be an even better book!