Accidentally Married Avis

I enjoyed how the love story played out. It was sad to lose Dawson before the baby was born though. I liked the way the author played out the story and it pretty much kept my attention ( I practically binge read!) With that said I do have a few negative comments. My biggest complaint is about the proofreading. Or lack of it. It was terrible. There should not have been that many errors, from saying the wrong character to words misspelled or misused. At times I couldn’t even figure out what the word was supposed to be. I also think the amount of money it took to read the book was on the high end. To have to continually read so many errors was aggravating and if I didn’t enjoy the story as much as I did I would have stopped reading it. .

Awwwww I totally loved this. I literally binge read it in 2 days and just could not put it down. Fabulous job on keeping the storyline suspenseful. I was on the edge of my seat for some sections and then got some sections I was most in tears. I can't believe how vile Jessica's aunt was. And when she got kidnapped I cried like she was my family. I love the story build up between Jessica and Xavier. Amazing job.

It is a good read. Jessica is falling for her husband and he is falling for her. He just can not see it now. She is being kind to everyone even him. What will he do if she stops cooking for him? He can tell she is not with him for his money. Plus he needs to grow up some. Maybe the Grandpa can convince him to take her on the honeymoon she deserves. Then maybe they will for in love.

I Love this, it is a very beautiful novel, captivating story. The only down I find is that it has a lot of spelling issues. It would be nice if they were corrected. I like how the two main characters are build and their interaction. The author had done a good job at keeping the storyline straight. I hope this novel is good up until the end. I am at the 40 chapter. I hope the story keeps getting better.

A very interesting , funny and captivating novel however , there are some grammatical errors as well as interchanging of names of characters in the novel e.g where it was Brian involved , Burke’s name was used and also in some other instances . On the whole it was a well written love story , enjoyable to read and easy to understand. The perspective of the 2 main characters to love and how their relationship started and blossomed was imaginary and the schemes by friends to initially create bad impression about Jessica are everyday happening in real life but it was good that notwithstanding the schemes , Jessica triumphed in the end .

It is good enough for me to want to keep reading but the grammar is extremely poor. It seems as if it was originally written in another language and the person translating it to English is not very good at English. The number reason why I will not pay for a package is because of the spelling/ grammar errors. The chapters are also very short. The average book has more pages to a chapter. I finish a chapter in mere seconds. It’s an adult fiction book yet the chapters are so short. There is no time to build the story that way.

It was a good premise, however many errors/ typos. It seems to drag for a long while, but zoom towards the end. The characters evolve and grew, but it seemed that sometimes things were forgotten. The idea of love blossoming from these strangers from different sides of the track translates well, I just wish that other relationships throughout flowed a little better. Also knowing more about how Alicia’s business relocation and transition to her husband’s town. Overall, I can complain too much I got to the end .

I really Loved this story! It was great and to the point! But what I really loved was that it didn’t take forever like some other stories! I’ll be looking forward to the next one! I’ll also be waiting for the sequel of this book! Just wished that you could have waited until the grandfather could have seen the baby before he passed away. But aside from that I enjoyed it immensely! If possible please put it on the app when it is finished, so that we don’t have to skip days to read it till the end! Thanks! ❤️

You must check your “he” and “she”. You use it at a few places not correctly. Instead of “her” you say “he” Many places misspelled Beginning of book is story very slow and at the end, the story is rushed and with know content. If you write a book you must study the facts, it’s important to give the true facts of the story otherwise don’t write about something if you don’t have the knowledge about the subject. For me it was a waste of time and money to read this book.

O livro é interessante, envolvente, a história tem uma pegada legal, mas o ritmo dos acontecimentos é muito lento… gostaria que acontecessem mais coisas em cada capítulo… tem alguns capítulos que não seriam tão necessários, poderiam ter sido melhor aproveitados… parece que a autora está enrolando a história pra segurar o leitor… mas vamos ver se esse romance começa a se desenrolar de uma vez, falta muito para eles conseguirem se alinhar, se entender e ficar juntos… quem sabe a história pegue um ritmo mais legal de uma altura pra frente, antes de eu cansar… rs