Accidentally Married Avis

I enjoyed how the love story played out. It was sad to lose Dawson before the baby was born though. I liked the way the author played out the story and it pretty much kept my attention ( I practically binge read!) With that said I do have a few negative comments. My biggest complaint is about the proofreading. Or lack of it. It was terrible. There should not have been that many errors, from saying the wrong character to words misspelled or misused. At times I couldn’t even figure out what the word was supposed to be. I also think the amount of money it took to read the book was on the high end. To have to continually read so many errors was aggravating and if I didn’t enjoy the story as much as I did I would have stopped reading it. .

Awwwww I totally loved this. I literally binge read it in 2 days and just could not put it down. Fabulous job on keeping the storyline suspenseful. I was on the edge of my seat for some sections and then got some sections I was most in tears. I can't believe how vile Jessica's aunt was. And when she got kidnapped I cried like she was my family. I love the story build up between Jessica and Xavier. Amazing job.

Could have been better if the writer did not mess up he with she man with woman etc had to have a broad imagination to understand this book but all in all it was a good story 👍 h ope you will continue the series I would like to know what happen with the children and hopefully Jessica will have twins this time. Also it's Alicia turn to have her baby so they all could grow up together and be great friends 🧡

It is a good read. Jessica is falling for her husband and he is falling for her. He just can not see it now. She is being kind to everyone even him. What will he do if she stops cooking for him? He can tell she is not with him for his money. Plus he needs to grow up some. Maybe the Grandpa can convince him to take her on the honeymoon she deserves. Then maybe they will for in love.

The story is different but the grammer and writing style is awful. The novel needs extensive proof reading and editing. It also needs filling out with descriptions that blend with the story instead feeling like they have been added in to explain the motivations of characters. The story started well with a bit of jealousy from the ex-boyfriend but that quickly disappeared without any consequences. The story seems to be drifting at this point and the main characters need at bit more spark and conflict.

I decided to read this after I got recurring ads for it while I played phone games. This is such a slow slow burn and not as spicy of a story as I thought it would be. It took over 50 chapters to even get to a first kiss so it felt PG-13. The storyline was okay but the constant grammatical errors, mixing up of names and mixing up of he/she made it frustrating to read. Wish the author would have proofread it before publishing.

Lovely book but it does have a lot of bad English. Nice storyline but I hope the chapters get reviewed and fixed up. Lovely book but it does have a lot of bad English. Nice storyline but I hope the chapters get reviewed and fixed up. Lovely book but it does have a lot of bad English. Nice storyline but I hope the chapters get reviewed and fixed up. Lovely book but it does have a lot of bad English. Nice storyline but I hope the chapters get reviewed and fixed up.

I am enjoying every minute and chapter abd always looking forward to the next one. I love how Xavier behaves towards Jessica from the very first day of their marriage. It is so funny how he is indenial about his feelings for her. You can tell from their first meeting that he liked her but can't accept his feelings towards her , or doesn't understand the feelings. Jessica though is a darling, I love how charged up she is, not intimida by hi wealth. I love this couple.

I really enjoyed this book. The story line was different than alot of other books that I have read and I had trouble putting it down. I laughed and cried along with the characters and will be looking forward to a possible sequel. To the author, you might want to have the story proofread as there are many errors in sentence structure. There were also a few instances where names were switched. Thankfully I was able to gloss over most of the errors. A couple of times I had to go back and reread a few pages to make sure I interpreted what I read as the author intended. But, as I said in the beginning, it was a very good story.

So far this book is good. I am really hoping to see Xavier change by showing more real emotions and becoming capable of loving someone. A real breakthrough for him. I am hoping for the best for Jessica too - I hope that they stay married and she gets her restaurant, which will be really successful. It would be nice to see society accept her. Maybe they can have the honeymoon and kids that grandpa wants them to have. I also hope he lives to see it.