
The Billioniare's Fake Forever
- Genre: Billionaire/CEO
- May-akda: Neroxpress
- Kabanata: 84
- Status: Nagpapatuloy
- Age rating: 18+
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Deskripsyon
She did not know she looked like a dead woman. She did not know that when Elliot Kane saw her on that pavement outside his building, something in him stopped. Just for a second. Just long enough for a name to slip past his lips that was not hers. All Sophie Reeves knew was that she was broke. Her landlord wanted her out in fourteen days, and a cold, unreadable billionaire was offering her more money than she had seen in months to attend one family dinner and play the role of his girlfriend. She said yes because she had no better option. She did not plan on the house that felt like it was holding its breath. She did not plan on the way his family looked at her like she was something precious and painful at the same time. She did not plan on a man who spoke in careful words, gave nothing away, and still somehow made her feel like the most seen person in every room. And she did not plan on Elliot Kane at all. He is not warm. He is not easy. He is the kind of man who has been carrying something heavy for so long he has forgotten what it feels like to put it down. He did not hire Sophie to feel anything. He hired her to fill a space. The problem is, Sophie does not fill spaces. She takes up her own. Now she’s caught in a place that still holds someone else’s memory… standing beside a man who insists this is just an arrangement… but looks at her like it’s something more. And Sophie doesn’t know what’s more dangerous— being the girl he only brought here for a price… or becoming the one he won’t be able to let go.
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This desperately needs proof reading, there are author notes left in at chapter 36, huge continuity errors, Marcus is sometimes the brother sometimes the cousin, cathedral or registry office, known each other weeks or months, Sophie first left the house on a Sunday morning but then everyone was at work, she knew about Isabelle early on and later had no idea who she was, all simple errors which proof reading would have picked up. If it hadn’t been for the author notes I would have thought there was a lot of AI content. The story is interesting but the issues above really do detract and are frustrating. Those were my views half way through, and I was reasonably positive. However it carries on fine until chapter 54 when Eliot is suddenly called Cole. Then it becomes a total shambles from chapter 66. The story up to chapter 65 is unresolved. From chapter 66 onwards for another 20+ chapters it is a word soup of earlier chapters repeated over and over again with minor changes, numerous chapters about a similar story between Nora and Cole which make no sense and appear to be early drafts or ideas of the Sophie and Eliot story with some differences. I am really unhappy at the combination of coins and time it took to plough through the remaining chapters to end up with no clue how the story ended. Very poor oversight and proof reading and should not have been published on the app in this form.
October 31, 2026
