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Alpha Damien is a multi-billionaire. He's a mafia and a strict businessman. He runs a lot of businesses and also gives loans to people... if you can't afford to repay your loan, he collects whatever he wants to take from you that is equivalent to the loan. He's a ruthless and fearless Alpha, but he finds out his mate is the daughter of his own of his debtors, and she has lived all her life as a nun... How would a nun satisfy a ruthless Alpha???
Alpha Rhon
It was a good story. Just badly written. Grammar was bad, words misspelled writer had problem remembering the name of the characters. Ending could have been written better. With computers today it's easier to proof read what you wrote checking spelling. Would have liked a better ending. It was like. "Well the drama is over nothing more to write." Maybe the next time you write something you won't let some characters in limbo. Like how did they resolved the problems with her family. There was more that could of been written. That way the reader not left hanging.
June 27, 2025
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