Offside Temptation

Offside temptation This novel was catching from the beginning, each chapter ending, leaving me wanting more. Just a shame that between each chapter I had to watch adverts of some sort, being a none member. This meant I was constantly taken away from the story and I had to keep bringing myself back to it. The relationship between Amanda and Jayden is so sweetening. However, I was bothered by the fact that we never got to see Amanda’s mother’s reaction to the relationship and that we were introduced to Amanda’s mother’s new relationship only for us to not hear any more of it. I would’ve liked to have seen how Amanda’s and Jayden’s relationship progressed. For example, we didn’t get to see Jayden’s proposal and this is such a key moment that should’ve been part of one of the final chapters. We also never heard about what happened to Kara. This was slightly confusing as Jayden had just gone from pushing Amanda away to protect her to him all of a sudden fight for her. After Amanda’s and Jayden’s second break, it would’ve been nice to have seen a lot more yearning from him, it just felt rather rushed back into the relationship storyline. I also would have loved to have seen more of Ethan’s new relationship. We only have brief mentions of it but Ethan plays such a crucial role, he should have been more included into the storyline. This novel had me hooked, and although it had minor flaws and many spelling errors, which did annoy me ever so slightly, I was able to move past them and really see the heart of Jayden’s and Amanda’s story