The Wrong Alpha - A Twist of Fate?
- Gen: Werewolf
- Autor: Beth Jackson
- Capitole: 147
- Status: Finalizat
- Clasificare de vârstă: 18+
- 👁 25.7K
- ⭐ 7.1
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Descriere
Delilah can’t wait for her boyfriend to turn 17, for him to meet his Alpha wolf, and finally sense his fated mate. She has long since been predicted as his fated mate by all in their pack having been childhood sweethearts. They make a perfect couple so this would be the perfect love story for them. Surely fate couldn’t take an unexpected twist sending her on a painful path she didn’t expect? That painful path could change the person she once was but may bring an unexpected ally……could it be in a bitter twist of fate Delilah all along had held her hopes on the wrong Alpha?
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Story line fine however calling 2.5-3 pages (one was 1.5 pages) a Chapter is ridiculous. Charging for the volume ridiculous too. 3 long repetitive ads vexing with such a short read. Previous stories much better with Chapters around 15 pages. You need better editing, poor grammar and often far to repetitive. Overall, storyline of teen angst and vilification ok but needs meatier response by victim. You can’t keep turning the other cheek. Growing a spine necessary.
May 17, 2026
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