Rejected by My Hockey Alpha Stepbrother #omegaverse

I love this story! I really connected with the characters' feelings. I couldn't stop reading! Although it's a pity that there are so many inconsistencies. For example, there are two completely different versions of the meeting between Damon and Elliot in the dungeon. After the rogue's attack, in one chapter, Elliot's suitcase was found in the woods where the attack took place and Damon took it back to Silver Moon pack. But in an other chapter, Elliot has his suitcase in Mooncrest... Adrian is described as mateless and childless and then later Elliot has 2 siblings and a stepmother. The name of Leila's pack changed in the middle of the book (first it was "Ashwood" then "Red Valley"). I love how consent and choice are presented as a necessity for a healthy relationship. However I think I read 30 times the exact same discussion. The same phrases said by the same character. I understand that change of behaviour does not happen overnight and that Elliot need to be sure Damon doesn't feel entitlement after a small progress. But there are just too many repetitions...