Recenzii: Alpha Nicholas

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

I loved this book. I just wish Tony and Rosie could have found their boys. I also wish there could’ve been more of the story with Robbie and how things turned out for him. It had a lot of twists and turns which kept me wanting more. Perhaps in time there will be more to this story, which I would look forward to. I would be thrilled if there was a continuation of the story in a future book. I appreciate being able to read this book, which allowed me to escape to a different reality. Thank you!

Wonderful story! I cried, laughed, gotten angry & fought with them. The story lines with this family really touched my heart. I loved how they all made Bonnie & Lilly welcome. How they accepted them with minimal questions. How patient the men were with their new mates. I would however love to know if Robbie gets to go get his mate. Also if they find the boys. That would for another time. Thank you for sharing you fabulous story with us.

I really like the novel so far. It actually has a build up to the trust between the two main characters. The writing style is a bit childish but really not a bad read at all. I cannot wait to see where this is headed and I really hope Will figures out what is wrong with his wolf. You instantly fall in love or dislike the characters and they are portrayed well. Thank you for the lovely read! Would love to see more of your work!

It started off really well and was keeping me hooked but then it kept bouncing from one couple to another without really finishing the couple story off, and then parts of it was dragging and for some reason you’d read one chapter and then go to the next chapter which is the exact chapter you’d just read but from a different character point of view. Unfortunately the book finishes without some couples having sorted their story out so you kind of left hanging about the rest of the story and having to make up your own ending, which is annoying after having read the story.

While this book has a good story and compelling character development, it unfortunately suffers from a noticeable lack of proper formatting, layout consistency, and thorough editing. As I read through the chapters, I frequently found myself correcting misspelled words and mentally re-phrasing sentences just to make them make sense grammatically. These constant disruptions broke the narrative flow and made it difficult to stay fully immersed in the world the author created.Additionally, the ending felt incredibly rushed and left several major plot points unresolved, which was disappointing after investing so much time into the build-up. With a rigorous proofreading pass and a more fleshed-out conclusion, this could easily be a standout novel, but the current execution feels like a missed opportunity.

I really liked this story. The author did a great job of building the characters so that they were relatable. I truly loved the strong relationships within the alpha family and how they were so unwaveringly loyal to each other. And, on that same note, I absolutely loved how the boys’ mates were just automatically accepted and instantly loved; they were family from the moment the mate bond was recognized and it just felt like an extension of their incredible family bonds. Family is everything!