Recenzii: Offside Temptation

Offside temptation This novel was catching from the beginning, each chapter ending, leaving me wanting more. Just a shame that between each chapter I had to watch adverts of some sort, being a none member. This meant I was constantly taken away from the story and I had to keep bringing myself back to it. The relationship between Amanda and Jayden is so sweetening. However, I was bothered by the fact that we never got to see Amanda’s mother’s reaction to the relationship and that we were introduced to Amanda’s mother’s new relationship only for us to not hear any more of it. I would’ve liked to have seen how Amanda’s and Jayden’s relationship progressed. For example, we didn’t get to see Jayden’s proposal and this is such a key moment that should’ve been part of one of the final chapters. We also never heard about what happened to Kara. This was slightly confusing as Jayden had just gone from pushing Amanda away to protect her to him all of a sudden fight for her. After Amanda’s and Jayden’s second break, it would’ve been nice to have seen a lot more yearning from him, it just felt rather rushed back into the relationship storyline. I also would have loved to have seen more of Ethan’s new relationship. We only have brief mentions of it but Ethan plays such a crucial role, he should have been more included into the storyline. This novel had me hooked, and although it had minor flaws and many spelling errors, which did annoy me ever so slightly, I was able to move past them and really see the heart of Jayden’s and Amanda’s story

I loved it! First of all it a great example with hard work you can become anything! Nothing is impossible! Practice and hard work! I loved Amanda and Peyton friendship how much they loved each other and how they contained their friendship in College… Amanda and Jayden are rare gems what they found… I loved reading every second of it because this kind of love is rare and you have to cherish it, especially Jayden went through a lot but if he just honest it had been easier still separated but let Amanda choose… Overall I loved this book!!

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The story definitely is a bit all over the place emotion wise. I some what like the transition of high school to college life though. Not too fond of the Kara character with how she is with the way she acts towards Amanda or how possessive she is over Jayden and also don't like the fact that she ends up pregnant claiming it to be Jaydens either... Curious to see how the story plays out in the end for sure

This is the first story I am enjoying for a while. Good to see someone actually be able to write for a change instead of the surface level AI rubbish that seems to have flooded this app. I love the sports theme again something different to make the story richer. I am already into Amanda’s story. Her dreams her sporting talent and drive and the pull to Jayden. I want more of his story. I hate that Kara is the complication in their story but I guess something has to bring the drama hey.

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Love this story Few typos but nothing I can’t read past ant not get the gist… It’s a seeet story that i think definitely has a twist coming re: baby momma I would have thought him pursuing a student would be a no go but …. I hope they get their happy ever after… I think I’ll look for this author again I quite like the content. Looking forward to her brother’s reaction and what happens with Kara

I really enjoyed this book and the writers style. The book kept my attention from the very start. It was refreshing to follow along with Amanda and Jaydens lives. I didn't like what Kara tried to do to Jayden, but that part kept the book even more interesting. I was waiting for a chapter dedicated to Kara's arrest and her trial to complete that story. I was happy Jayden and his father made amends and that Jayden took over the CEO position. The best part of course was that Jayden and Amanda found their way back to each other!

Brother's best friend falls for the little sister? Toxic ex that won't go away? Disapproving parents that can't celebrate achievements. Second make lead syndrome is a definite possibility. Athletes trying to overcome the odds - athletically and romantically. Can't wait to see what happens next. Sooooo good. Will they be able to get past all the obstacles in their way? I'm betting toxic ex is lying to get their way. Just waiting on the other shoe to drop because they're about as innocent as a serial killer.

Offside Temptation is a fun sports romance with plenty of chemistry, banter, and emotional tension. It started out a little slow at first but then I was able to get into it. It’s a character driven romance with enough heart and heat to satisfy my romance genre. You can definitely feel the chemistry between the two main characters that keeps you going to see what is going to happen next. Will they have their happy ever after or go their separate ways?