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Ulasan DANGEROUS ICE: MY HOCKEY NEMESIS IS MY SINFUL OBSESSION

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Sandy Hug

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It is a very cute story. Im the beginning there were a few confusing chapters, but it got a lot better in the next few chapters. I have not reached half of the book yet but so far I really like it. There are lots of ups and downs but not over the top so I feel like it stays interesting and doesn't get too dramatic. I hope the story stays well written and both have a happy ending after all the drama

September 4, 2026
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Annemarie

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Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat. Prima verhaal. Ik ben verslaafd en wil weten hoe het verhaal verder gaat.

September 3, 2026
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Allysia Best

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This novel is great so far! It got serious very fast and I was worried the storyline would stall, but so far it just keeps getting better. The individual characters are good, both the main and supporting characters, and their development is good too. I'm a sucker for a good enemies to lovers story. I was worried it would become flat when the main characters became genuine lovers so quickly, but the author has done a good job keeping it interesting by adding new challenges for these characters to overcome.

September 1, 2026
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Ci'Lah Stewart

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So far I’m liking the story line. It definitely has some plot twist that I wasn’t expecting but they were really good. I can’t wait to continue reading the rest of the story. I was really saddened by Michael and Gabe’s family history. I can’t not stand their Father. And I think it was wrong for their mother to leave them while they were so young. But I’m hoping it all works out in the end.

August 30, 2026
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SilaKat

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❤️❤️❤️Ice hockey romances are very fashionable right now. I have enjoyed reading this novel. Well-written with an interesting plot. Interesting characters and compelling settings.I particularly like the chemistry between the main characters.An appropriate number of supporting characters which support the development of the story well. Hot 🔥I look forward with great interest to seeing how the story continues and what kind of climactic finale awaits the main characters. I hope for a hot and happy conclusion to this wonderful story.

August 11, 2026
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Hiengs

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Das Tempo ist sehr angenehmen. Die Entwicklung der Beziehung nachvollziehbar. Ein paar mehr Hintergrundinfos zu den Charakteren wären interessant, zum Beispiel weiß ich nicht, was Michael studiert. Auch wenn die Grundidee hinter dem Plot keine neue ist, ist sie doch gut rübergebracht. Es macht Spaß zu lesen, sehr angenehm und macht neugierig, wie es weiter geht. Der Vater stellt sich etwas plump an, zu offensichtlich und ungeübt. Es macht den Anschein, als ob er Geld und Einfluss hat, scheint aber nicht gut mit umgehen zu können.

July 27, 2026
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Shar

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I'm not a writer, but I know that writing is a journey that has its twists and turns. However, there is a thing called continuity and character development that all good writers follow. Unfortunately, this book had none of that when it came to the supporting details. Axel began the book as a hockey player, then suddenly became a nursing student with no further mention of him playing hockey. It's college, I get it; nursing could have been his major, but that wasn't woven into the story, instead of being dropped in like a bad addendum. Then there was the brother, Gabriel, who I'm pretty sure started as a college student, turned into a seventeen-year-old, then an emancipated minor with no guardian, and ended the book as a young teenager in high school who apparently needed to take the bus to school. How was he getting back and forth to Michael's huge house at the beginning of the story? When did Michael move out of the house, and how did Axel's dorm room suddenly morph into their dorm room where they started the semester out with nothing? Again, rival team captains who were at each other's throats at the start of the book! The book started relatively well and steamy, but somewhere along the way it became this stilted, prudish (compared to the start) book that read like it was written by many different people who couldn't decide on what style and tone to maintain. Seriously, does no one proofread text or care about the flow of the story anymore?

July 26, 2026

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Very original novel with some quite sexy encounters. The actors are totally in their stories but some aspects look unfamiliar or out of caractere. We are rather attracted to the young people by their physical presence, their personalities look real even if sometimes their reactions seem out of phase or exaggerated. Like the suspense and I hope that the bad guys will loose at the end. axel meets to win and to be able to clear the drama created by Michael’s father.

July 15, 2026
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Lisa Murray

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So far the story has been exciting. I enjoy the conflict between the characters. It is awesome to see this story could be a reality that has drawn me in. I can't wait to see what happens next. Axel and Michael are hot making this story increasingly interesting to the point I don't want to put the book down. I'm rooting for them through all of the difficulties they are facing. Go team Michael and Axel!! Keep this story hot and sexy!

June 28, 2026
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Gabriela Ramos Liñan

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Llevo muy pocos capítulos. Pero estoy enamorada de los dos personajes principales! Tanto de Axel y Michael! Bueno que historia tan romántica! Me encanta los giros que han ido dando en la historia y de cómo poco a poco muy sutilmente la relación entre ellos se ha ido fortaleciendo. Tengo muchas ganas que continuar y leer que les deparará a los protagonistas. Y de las nuevas personajes que están apareciendo como Gabe el hermano de Michael. Seguro que tendrá algo protagónico.

June 28, 2026