Mga review ng The Alpha Who Owns The Ice

So I am loving the storyline, it is very interesting and the teists are all perfect. What I am not loving is several chapters full on repeat themselves and the first page of several others is just a repeat of the last page of the previous one. Makes me glad that I only watch commercials and dont pay for the chapters, but at the same time is a turn off and makes me feel like I have wasted my time because the words are the same and now I am back at a commercial again. I wish the writer would have better proofread their work to avoid this:(

The story is good so far. There is an unexpected twist or two, I hope the author does not overdo these twists like other authors, even famous ones, who happen to have exactly one pattern they write. Looking forward to find out how the story is going to end and who are the real culprits. I am not such a creative writer and I would hate to do some spoilers, so I try to somehow fill the necessary words to be able to publish.

Find this story odd, how does she have a younger brother? The core of this book concentrates on two sisters only being the nucleous of the family that was destroyed. It states both sisters grew up in the foster system, it is muddling the novel. I don't know if any one proof reads these tales but, if they do how can they have missed this anamoly? I can't say l'm enjoying this read as it's confusing the whole tale. Could have been an interesting read !!!