One Night with My Ex's Alpha Brother

Overall, the plot is very realistic and the descriptions make you feel as if you are understanding it moment by moment. The idea for the story is good, but sometimes there are typos and mix ups with genders of third-party characters. That makes it a bit confusing. Also sometimes I feel like some of the descriptions can be just filler words and ways to make the chapter longer without a progression in the story. Overall, like I said it's a good story and it has a lot of potential, but only if the author doesn't just write filler words. The author has a good idea and has done a decent job so far. More work could be done to tighten it up and fill the pages with more than just descriptive words to make it more valuable.