Fleeing The Relentless Alpha

This was a good read. I really like the diversity and the inclusion of the vampires and the plot twist of the human world. It’s unlike other werewolf stories I’ve read that are repetitive that have the same storyline. This one was completely different and it kept me interested. I didn’t want to put my phone down. The only critique I have is that it needs to be o o proofread before publishing because in some chapters there were complete paragraphs that were repeated. That was disappointing because I purchased coins to read this and having done that I felt cheated thinking I’m getting full chapters of authentic content and I just felt like s one of the chapters were repeated to make longer just to make those chapters longer and the story seem like it was longer as well. There could’ve been more content added to the dialogue there was no need to do that, it was disappointing for sure.