Mga review ng Troublemaker Meets The Four Hottie Professors

On the whole, this was a good story but the writing itself is full of flaws. This reads like a first draft and it is desperately in need of revision and polishing. There are multiple times where characters names change - Cheska's brother Calix's name changes to Chris for a few chapters and I'm not sure if her friend's name is Lily or lizzie. The chapters between 90 and 100 seem to be out of order too. The sex scenes in the first half are repetitive and feel like they've been written by someone who doesn't have much sexual experience. Also the lead character's age keeps changing too. Lots of potential but needs lots of work.

The book is ok, expensive and a little mind f*CK.. it's definitely something.. I don't have alot to say as it's only chapter 30. But we'll see how it continues.. Hmm Hmm Hmm hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm