Mga review ng The Mafia Kings Plaything

Two words to describe this story - CONVOLUTED and CONTRADICTORY. It's convoluted because there are hundreds of different story threads tangling around each other making knots and loose threads. A story should be a tapestry, all the story threads weaving together to eventually create a picture. When you look back at this story you see all the ( plot) holes and loose threads dangling with no answers to why those threads were included in the first place. It's also contradictory because so many times we are given another character's POV on the previous scene and it is so different to the 1st POV it's like it was written by someone else who didn't bother to read what was previously written. There is a pointless character in the 1st half of the story who has disassociative personality disorder and this story reads like it was written by him and his alternatives. This story should have been read, revised and edited by the author themselves before publishing on this app.

A bit all over the place but fun to read. Lots of wrong terminology and repetitive comments, especially in sexually graphic parts but it still made sense. The roles/ characters and flow were well written and the twists and turns flowed well making it easy to read. Follow on should be good as there is room for lots of twists and turns and it’s well set up for many possible endings. Overall a great read and I’m looking forward to next volume

this work as a dark, gritty exploration of base desires, highlighting the blend of intense, heart-wrenching action with psychopathic characters. slow-burn tension, describing the relationship between the two main characters as a volatile, "must-read" dynamic. So, I can try to suspend reality a bit, especially with instalove. However, it was really difficult with this book. It starts off with a virgin heroine, a newly 18 seamstress, who has no idea that her father works with the MMC/mafia kingpin