Mga review ng The Alpha Twins, My Mates

I am enjoying the story so far. There are a few grammatical mistakes but not many. It is also pretty easy to figure out what the author meant most of the time. The story line is pretty good though I'm still not a huge fan of her mates. Personally I think she let her mates off to easy. I do enjoy that it has different points of view. Overall I would say it is a good story and while I'm not sure how I feel about where it seems to be going with her mates I like that it's not the same storyline I'm used to reading.

Love, the storyline. Different from alot of Alpha style novels, not all sex and seduction, it has a good base story to get your teeth into. I do however question why there are so many asshole characters, that are truly thick. No regard to ranks in packs. Time for some proper punishment from the hierarchy. Love it.!!!! Appreciate the easy options to get free chapters. Don't have to wait for a day to unlock chapters as this site gives you many ways to get chapters free. Way to go :)

This was truly a different story. I thought it might have the same narrative as previous ones but it was good. I would have preferred the ultimate battle to be a bit longer and also a bit more descriptive battle between Dante and the King. The end was a bit short. Almost as if the author was no longer interested in writing. With everything in detailed description I've expected a longer end to the story. It was to abrupt. I did enjoy the book.

This book is so good that ive read it at least 2 to 3 times and the characters are also so amazing which why i love this book so well as the action that happens throughout the chapters of the book and how the fact that Ruby doesnt take no shenanigans from the other she wolf and i was so amazed by the makeover that Ruby got from her grandfather and i love how funny how her grandmother was around the boys.

I loved all the story, the drama, the romance! Especially when Rue came back and was been a bad girl with her mates who was regretted of everything, just because she leave the pack! Haye and Zylon were young and arrogant, it's good that Rue leave so they could grow up with regret, but the most problematic at the beginning was Hayes. I will be honest, I shipped a little Rue with Henry and wanted those two to be together, but, I knen by the title's name that she wasn't going to be with Henry. Well, in the end, Rue ened with Hayes and Zylon whose were more mature than before, of course, they were still a little arrogant, but not like before and I think that it was the best because the three characters (Rue, Zylon and Hayes) growed up together as a couple.

I found this book hard to put down because of all the suspense drama and excitement I also embraced in the sorrow of ruby being rejected by her mates in the beginning but I’m glad that everything worked out for her in the end but it threw me for a loop that four years went by what happened within those four years how did her delivery go did Tate and Beth get married or did they just have a baby together

The book was ok overall. Not too many spelling errors, but a few name switches and odd phrases sporadically throughout the book. I didn’t like how you would read part of a chapter and the characters were one place and the next paragraph in that same chapter shows the characters somewhere else, doing something else. For example - one minute they are at the beach, playing in the water and in the next chapter they are in an office. But there was no natural progression or explanation for the timeline jump to make a smooth transition. That felt disjointed and hard to follow. The ending felt rushed, using the epilogue to finalize the endings of most of the secondary characters. So overall, it was ok.

This was a delight to read. Drama, action, heartfelt emotions spilling all over the place. It was good, well written characters, great storyline. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter. Every line, every character, every chapter was on point. Nothing was overdone, perfect balance between descriptive kink and the imagination, with every chapter ending pulling you in for the next one. The author did a great job with this novel. Even with the ending as it is, I would love to read a follow up novel, there is so much more that can be written and that makes this novel even better for me. With or without a follow-up novel, this one does have a great satisfying ending... With lots of possibilities... Just saying 😉

Great nice novel fascinating read plot was worth it and steamy love scenes. Difficult to put down page turner will recommend to all ages young or old and the best part it was free to completely read from beginning to the very last page 😀 creative page turning plot twisting must read again and again over and over and over overall the hero being twins and the heroine being a super warrior wolf was intriguing thumbs up to the author

Really enjoyed the story, though the abrupt switch in storyline from one paragraph to the next was sometimes a bit jolting. The editing also left a bit of a bad taste in my mouth, but nonetheless, it was still a good read. One aspect of the story I truly enjoyed, was how the author incorporated other POV's as those characters had something of interest going on in their lives. It was really nice to have that insight into the other characters.