Love'n'Lust

Plot and storyline somewhat tenuous, but I read until the end, so there's definitely something there! Grammatically the book is a disaster and I do feel awful saying that, but it's so easy to use the Spelling and grammar functions or have someone proof read the text, that I feel it's fully justified. The Author Notes and repeated paragraphs pad out the word count, which is great for the author, but a waste of coins for the reader.. That definitely needs adjusting. In saying that and to repeat myself, I did read the entire book and enjoyed it outwith the above comments. I hope the author is able to adjust her editing package, reissue the novel and continue on her writing journey, as she holds much promise to come. Thank you.