Mga review ng The Unwanted Bride: Claimed by the Billionaire

The editing could use a lot of work and the plot conflicts resolve too early imo. Interesting premise, with a fun amount of subplot and different perspectives. I would have loved to see more from a trial or something, since at least two people wound up in jail. I also would have enjoyed a redemption arc. I guess the biggest thing that felt like it was missing is I don't think we ever found out for sure who attacked Cassie while she was pregnant?

Just love love looovee ittt! But the ending was getting so long. Could have ended a few chapters ago but still love it. And it is quite obvious that they would have probably like 13 kids in their marriage considering the fact that they can’t keep their hands to themselves. 😂 Anyway love the story! Love the characters. Love the family. Love the couple. It brings so much joy to know that a fictional family could have this much love between them.

Entertaining read. Love the Shawn character. Often annoyed with the Cassie character's low self esteem & whininess. The story line at the registry office was a good place to start although it took WAY too long to get the explanation about how he selected her as his bride. It was a very Cinderella story with the step relatives abusing her while searching for the same prince. My favorite character was sister Kay. Story dragged & why was there a blank page at the end of nearly every chapter?

I really am enjoying the novel. Only thing I do not like are the typos and Lauretta was called Lori and few times and I had to figure out who Lori was. But I like the pace of the store and where it is going so far. I am hoping that Cassie will not get mistreated so badly when she does encounter her step mom and half sister. She is slowing building up her confidence with Shawn. I am looking forward to finishing the novel.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It surely confirms that when you do things truthfully with an open heart, blessings will come your way. All those who hurt you will reap the quenciquenses of their actions. You will be the last to laugh 😃. Cassie deserved the good life that was taken away from her driven by greed and selfishness. I just wish Cassie's father lived to learn that Lauretta was his daughter, whom he cherished so much at the experience of his real daughter. Also, I would have loved to see him being disrespected and abused by Lauretta and Rhoda while Cassie was now loving a good life.

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The story was interesting, but it could have been a lot shorter without losing anything… honestly, not one I would re-read of recommend. Words are often misused and writing gets pregressively worse from about halfway through the novel. Some chapters really feel like useless filling for the sake of it. It would need serious editing to be really good. All in all, I would not recommend this novel, I really struggled to get to the end and only did so because I used my coins to unlock it all.

EXACTLY WHAT IS NEEDEDDDD 🔥. The way the storry is organised and written in a structured manner is what makes it deserve a 5 star. It s just the mix of the best of all . The trope is fab 💫 . It made me addicted . This became the reason for me to use the app much more and spend my time on it . ⚡🌟 It is .y humble request to u that that please make more stories of such sort 💟 keep going well 😄

Great story line! Curious to learn how long Shawn has been in love with Cassie, and what he is keeping from her. I’m not a fan of the step mom and sister, but there always has to be a villain. They are going to hate Cassie more once they find out she is married to the billionaire they have set their eyes on. I hope Cassie stands up for herself and sets them straight. I will find out soon.

I like how the characters are developing and how both of their walls are slowly coming down while they are slowly getting to know more about each other. Beyond the physical aspect which is also slowly developing and exploring what the other likes. Really curious to have some things explained that are still being kept in the dark. It would help understand both characters more I'm sure. And of course no story is complete without a villian/villainess arch so can't wait for that.