Darling, Only I Can Be Your Man

I have read a lot of online books some good some bad and some terrible, this one has a good storyline but is badly written it needs editing badly you need to edit in your head as you read and reread some lines to make sense of the what is being said I think in the authors own language would be better, like I said it is a good novel just badly written and sometimes the characters and the writing seems immature.