
THE BIKER ALPHA WHO BECAME MY SECOND CHANCE MATE
- Género: Werewolf
- Autor: Ray Nhedicta
- Capítulos: 215
- Estado: Completado
- Clasificación por edades: 18+
- 👁 14.9K
- ⭐ 9.7
- 💬 0
Anotación
“You’re just like a sister to me.” Those were the actual words that broke the camel’s back. Not after what just happened. Not after the hot, breathless, soul-shaking night we spent tangled in each other’s arms. I knew from the beginning that Tristan Maverick was a line I shouldn’t cross. He wasn’t just anyone, he was my brother’s best friend. The man I spent years secretly wanting. But that night… we were broken. We had just buried our parents. And the grief was too heavy, too real.... so I begged him to touch me. To make me forget. To fill the silence that death left behind. And he did. He held me like I was something fragile. Kissed me like I was the only thing he needed to breathe. Then left me bleeding with six words that burned deeper than rejection ever could. So, I ran. Away from everything that cost me pain. Now, five years later, I’m back. Fresh from rejecting the mate who abused me. Still carrying the scars of a pup I never got to hold. And the man waiting for me at the airport isn’t my brother. It’s Tristan. And he's not the guy I left behind. He's a biker. An Alpha. And when he looked at me, I knew there was no where else to run to.
Karma
The story started off strong and had me in tears. Then it started taking a turns where it seem the author forgot what they've written previously. Such as at the beginning there was inner dialogue between the wolf and the human then completely forgotten about. To Jess (ML dead mate) was chosen mate not fated mate mind you and Athena (FL) is the fated mate but is called a 2nd chance mate (did not like that 1 bit since they were meant to be since the beginning but the ML was to stupid). Then finally they talk about the FL having powers and the little girl represents these powers. There was heart felt inner dialogue moment in these chapters and then is completely drop never to be touched upon or elaborated anymore (like having inner dialogue between the wolf, the girl and FL). This story had so much potential to be great if they did a little bit of trimming on certain areas and expanded on things that they should have been kept in the story. Not bad story but could have been soooooo much better.
September 11, 2026
