The Alpha’s Human Mate
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A tall.. super handsome guy stands by the door... his hazel green eyes staring into mine like he's trying to find my soul. My eyes moved to his lips and I subconsciously bite my lower lip.. I suddenly feel like crashing my lips on his.. I feel myself being drawn to him. I can hear my heart beating fast... it's just like I fell in love with him at first sight.. this is the first time I'm feeling this way. Then I heard him utter a word. "Mate" ************************* She's a girl who lost her parents to the rogues attack and was left with ger two elder brothers who decided to change her environment for fear of being hunted again. Stacey got into a new school. She was treated bad for not being a werewolf. But everything changed when it happens that she's the Alpha's mate. Will she agree to be his mate after her parents were killed by creatures like him?
tash
Nice story line, some areas could use some extra work, like how Ray saved Stacey, seems like we are missing a few chapters there?? maybe make Ray’s character a little more lovable? He seems so cold and a brute. However towards the end of the book I was getting frustrated, it really needs some work on editing towards the end lots of errors and Grammar mistakes. POV starting with fresh paragraphs so it’s a little less confusing when changing characters.
October 30, 2024
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