The Alpha's Flower
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My name is Rose Bailey. I am seventeen years old and about to start my senior year of High school. I have always lived a normal, boring human life. I never believed in the supernatural or the love at first sight sh*t that others girls my age fall for. That is until I moved with my mom and two brothers back to the small town where my mom grew up. My mom makes us stay at this house, or should I say castle, with a lot of other people living there. Imagine my surprise when I walked in on a man and two women that looked to be 20 or 21, having in a room that looked like an office. Imagine how surprised I was when I was frozen in place, unable to move, as I felt a sharp pain in my chest from seeing them together as he one from behind while she leaned over a desk from pleasure and the other woman was him. The man froze in place and looked at me with a guilty look on his face. The pain got worse in my chest, and before I blacked out, I swore I heard him say, Mate!
Snoopy38002
The story is good, solid, but the writing was juvenile and the last 20 chapters were so scattered and rushed it brought the whole story down. How many times do you have to be kidnapped from the bathroom to STOP GOING there in a public place? You changed parts of the story from one chatter to the next…everyone wanted to blame Rose for everything AB’s all Alpha could do was whine, I almost lost you again…. Really, some series editing is needed and you need to get rid of the unnecessary chapters and enhance the ones left. I like a good sex scene, but you used it as filler too many times and it got boring!
July 11, 2026
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