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For the first time I don’t know what to say lol. It had potential but it’s not organised properly I guess that’s the word. The storyline is jumbled up. It’s like there is two versions of this book and someone just mixed it in one without thinking. It needs reviewing and editing properly and then you can say it’s a good book. I nearly gave up, I don’t know how is finished it lol

Thank you. It was an up and down journey of pain, love, hope and success. I was so angry at Lucien in the beginning, the auction but Ella prevailed and found a love and life she deserved. Those children are extraordinary and I look forward to reading about their adult lives and loves. I look forward to reading more about everyone and seeing how much the world expands and grows. I'm so glad that the people who were in hiding now have a world free of fear and can enjoy life instead of fearing it.

Great plot and characters. Not to many different characters and their names were not so close to each other you get them confused. Development of the story line and character’s was seemless and great. But it dragged and the timeline was not consistent. Lily was there long before the twins were born but after 2 months it was stating that Lily was only at pack for 6 months. You also stated that Lily was sick and that Ella was working as a waitress…….but then said Lily was a waitress. Last 4 chapters was just saying the same thing different chapter

There were several chapters that got repeated and several of the same statements repeated quite often, that felt repetitive. It's a good story. I really liked reading about Caelan and Luna. How they were before they were born and all the things they were capable of at an extremely young age. But the fighting/ conflicts were slightly intense but not heart stopping or heartbreaking. So I think there could have been more? Yes! I liked reading about the changes Luna Ella made because she was strong and never backed down.

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This is a well written story. However there were a lot of repetitive chapters. The storyline line is weird ten million to purchase a bride when a little courtship might have worked because they were fated mates. The drama was unnecessary. The kids are wiz kids because no 3 year olds are that smart but stories are make beliefs. Finally I love as it ended with so much love and happiness. Great job. Nice.

This was a lovely story , although a few of the chapters were repeated. Thank you for an enjoyable read. The scope of the story was really over a long period, which gave all the characters time to be fully developed into interesting side stories on their own. The growth of the depth of feeling between the Alpha and Luna throughout the book is what makes this stand out from the normal Werewolf books - from the auction right through to the end.

When I first started this book I fel sorry for the girl's lives. The mother sick, the youngest sister also sick. I was wondering how their lives would get better. It definitely got better and their lives became extordinary. I enjoyed this book. And yes the spicy parts are spicy, lol. I enjoyed seeing how Ella had changed, into the luna she needed to be. It was also nice to see Lucian finally get on board. He was pissing me off. I Would read another of her books. Ty for creating a very entertaining story.

Totally enjoyed this novel, my only problem was paying for chapters that were repeating previous ones, this happened three or four times and was quite off putting and and annoying when you were parting with coins for the repeated ones. The development of the childrens special gifts was interesting as was the feeling of everything moving forward. Although at times the chapters were very repetative the story kept you interested enough to carry on reading until the end. Would recommend this book.

Good story. Sometimes repetitive but likeable characters and keeps your attention. Combines supernatural and human qualities very well. Writer sometimes forgets that Lily was sick when first introduced but does Great with completing the story and giving closure on each character. Writer makes the characters someone you'd like to know and emulate. I hope she writes a novel about the twins as adults and how they use the building blocks their parents gave them in their adult lives. I'd like yo see Ella and Lucien as grandparents