Sold To The Ruthless Alpha Billionaire Opiniones

This is a well rounded story. Giving answers in a timely manner. Not stringing them along to keep you guessing long after it should have been revealed. I like that it's finished, but can have sequels and spin-offs. That can be written, but don't have to be. As the story is complete, everything has been addressed and nothing is left that you are wondering about. I can even see a prequel or 2.if any are written I will definitely read them.

Great start to the novel, and I enjoyed the story line. There are some missing chapters and some duplicate chapters, and some editing work is needed, but good effort! Edits needed: timeliness need to be synced up to match through out the book. For example, the amount of time Lucien has left to live and the amount of time until the Luna Ella gives birth are inconsistent throughout the book. A continuity check needs to be conducted on this book. It would make a good story great.

I really love this book. This is the first online book that i have actually finished, in a very very long time. I love all of the characters and love how each one is described. The story line wants you to carry on reading more, and gets you hooked. Some books get boring towards the end but this one doesn't, and also sometimes these books are a bit predictable which this book isn't. Also some of these books aren't finished which is really annoying so it's great that this book is and has a really lovely ending.

Nice love story of buolding a better word for the family you don't dare to dream for. Slightly repetitive, some chapters towards the end are fully repeated -so maybe not just slightly repetitive, but still exciting, especially at the beginning. It is warm and focused on right things, and I like it is life like, but understanding that bad thing are the part of the world and sometimes even they can be necessary for building the right things. The idea of everything happening just in the right time is also nicely presented. Nice easy summer read for me.

It was a good read. The story line was something different, which made it interesting. It was nice to have the end chapters talk about where everyone ended up and give a completion of the storyline and how everyone ended up. Beyond that it kept me engaged in the book. There was a lot more repetition then I would have liked but I understand it was trying to express some of the important points. Thank you for the story.

Selling/buying someone was such a weird beginning. But it definitely set the premise for the rest of the story. Learning of what/who she was felt like I was right there with her as she accepted what was and moved forward. Moving forward…always. The story of the twins was well written. Well documented with truth. The last few chapters began to lag. Too much repetition. Almost as if the author had a minimum number of words required by the publishers? I would enjoy reading your work. Thanks for the entertainment.

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I enjoyed reading this novel, which took you from a young girl trying to survive being kidnapped, bidded upon,sold to a man who was dying of a curse put upon from a woman that loved him, and then realizing it was all for nought. She saved him, Ella, help him and from that a loving union began. The road wasn't easy, but survived and with family, the pack, the children, they will live out their remaining lives in love and peace.

I feel like somewhere in this book should say “and a partridge in a pear tree.” This is a very long and drawn out story. It’s extremely repetitive with the same being written over and over. I’m the type of person who has to finish what I start but this book was very hard to get through. The storyline is there and very good but it needs some serious editing to get rid of all the repetitive stuff.

For the first time I don’t know what to say lol. It had potential but it’s not organised properly I guess that’s the word. The storyline is jumbled up. It’s like there is two versions of this book and someone just mixed it in one without thinking. It needs reviewing and editing properly and then you can say it’s a good book. I nearly gave up, I don’t know how is finished it lol