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It was an engrossing read. Highly recommended.🤗🤗🤗the phasing is just right. The twists sre exciting to the point i cant stop reading until my eyes got tired. People dhould explore this story its worth every penny i spent.the charscters are superb not too dramatic just the right blend. Just wished the author could have addded a couple mpre chapters. Coz i cant let go of the characters. Any way big thqnks to the author. I m glad i stumbled into this incredible book.

Just wasn't really good book and kept me on your toes you never knew what was going to happen next it was great I think the way that they stay together as a couple and supported each other it was awesome and then when they took care of their kids and guided in the way that they needed to be was just the best part actually even the main story with the parents was great I was so glad that they were able to help their children grow and find the correct way to live and help people

So, the storyline was decent but the execution needed some work. The book needs to be edited. Names changed a lot and so did the timeliness. Too many chapters repeating the same thing. Sage's constantly doubting her strength was boring and annoying. I loved Kael's fierceness and would have liked to hear more about him and Sage relationship as a couple. But despite the lack of editing and the repetition, this was a pretty good story.

I've left a comment after one of the chapters but I can do an overall review of the 40 that I've read. I enjoy the concept of the story yet it's hard to follow with inconsistencies and grammatical errors. Some key characters have the same name which can be very confusing. We have an Eleanor, who is Kael's grandmother and an Eleanor who is Sage's great-aunt. A Marcus who is Kael's Beta and a Marcus who is Sage's uncle. I also don't feel like the Luna powers that Sage possess are extraordinary and beyond anything any other wolf can do. Especially if she can delegate a lot of her workload to other Lunas and be trained to use her abilities by someone with no clue as to what her true potential is. She's simply problem solving, offering solutions and helping set up agreements, which can be rejected refused 0

The premise was good, and initial chapters were entertaining but as it progressed the repetition became more and more redundant. It seemed to serve no other purpose than lengthening the book by adding more chapters, which of course required more money/coins to complete. The story would have benefited from being more condensed and streamlined, the additional repetition did nothing to enhance the story, and in fact weakened it. The author started with a very good idea, which the initially developed well, but then got derailed by repetition.

This was an amazing story. Showed that love can prevail always. That strength comes in different forms. Things aren't always black an white. I do wish she could of worked more with the company after pregnancy. But it was a whorl wind after everything came out an then finding her past came forth. Im glad alpha Richard goblet go but he should of been stripped of right an power way b4 then. He was a headache all along. Glad they had help with everything

This was a heart warming story. The author did an amazing job at building characters that were easy to love and root for. The love story was just a bonus in the plot. The moral of the story that I got was that if we all stopped trying to tear each other down with our weaknesses and chose to support our strengths in each other, the world could be a much more peaceful place to be. This was a great story.

I found this novel interesting and well paced to start. Main characters were built quickly and the progress of their relationship was made believable and endearing. It was a surprise to find that MMC did not recognise MFC as his true mate. There seemed to be inconsistencies with what is expected werewolf abilities and this plot/storyline, especially as MMF has special abilities. Towards the end there were quite frequent repetitive phrasing about their lives, futures and those of the children. So glad had decent length chapters, and did not cut story short. Book 2 should start about now with Adrian & then Book 3 with Luna both as adults.

Such a great story and good details. Likes the creativity. Up to chapter 36. I'm not sure what else they want me to write to leave a review. Really want to go and see the new one of story and get it done. Thank you for reaching out to me a bit long sometimes boring Shower daily due to staffing safety precaution l and the client said they came to explain his side of the day and conversation to me and my friends

Can't put it down. I love reading it. The story has a good flow. There are a few places were mistakes are made like the chapter I just finished. They meet Eleanor Cross and some how she looks at Alexander before he arrives. I can use my imagination to explain it away but it's like sometimes she forgets who is who. There are also quite a few typos that I have looked over. But love the story just wish it was edited better.