His Discarded Luna, Returns with secret Pups Opiniones

So far I’m not feeling this book, I feel she is going to go back to Xavier, but the person the author should match her with is the one how has been with her through thick and thin. I don’t like how they have the man character sleep around but make the female character life very 😢 sad. So far this make this a disappointing story in my opinion. It seems to be going around in circles I’m getting bored the story is ok but so far I would not recommend it

I love thee stories o love when loves finds there way back to each other . More of these stories please I would love to get more points for free 😘 I love the characters of Eva and Xavier I wish she would have told Xavier about his kids so they can get back together and hurry and find out truth about Bella. But, I know soon they will be together. This story is awesome to read. I have always said they they were meant to be they will find their way back together. Thank you

Great story once you get over double chapters and some mixup with names other then that the book was well thought out and kept me intrigued throughout the whole book. The x ending was great but the story leading up to the end was carefully and well thought out all and all is is a great book not much talk of world shifting into actual wolves but that being said it was truly a good read and if there was ever a second book there is also enough room to make another or leave it as it is.

What a truly engaging great story. Wanted more depth at the end. More than a few chapter repeated sadly. Spelling mistakes and grammatical errors did not deter from the story line though. Yes, it was definitely was worth the read. So much drama, suspense, who done it… , so many unresolved questions, issues…to list a few things. Would have been interesting if there was more werewolf activities and such. There has to be an Axel spin off and a Nathan spin off

It’s a really good book. I really like most aspects of it but the only little thing I don’t like it. It feels like sometimes it’s being dragged out too much explanation. Like in some chapters, we repeat things a lot about how he feels about his dead child and his wife that he has the one that is evil so sometimes it seems a little bit repetitive but other than that the book is really great

Overall it was a good novel. It was a bit different because the sexual scenes were very tame. There were parts in the novel that made it hard to stop reading. And then there were some repetitious parts and chapters that made me do a double take and wondering if I was in a zone of the “did I touch something that made the chapter repeat? I also felt like the parts of the chapters that switched between scenes and characters should be separated. I spent a lot of time wondering why people were being called by different names, I didn’t realize that the writer was switching between scenes and stories. I wish the Derrick could have been saved and be given a second chance mate. Believe it or not I felt sorry for Bella, this is where the class system gets to me. However, I understand that she was disreputable and evil. She could have been afforded a good life. Like getting someone who could love her without her having to drug them for their affection. Jasmine’s story could have been explored to unearth the true nature of what really happened to her instead of skirting around the issue of child sexual abuse. Once again a good book and the writer did a good job of segueing into the various scenes and bringing in the different characters.

This is an excellent story that I wish would be completed so I don’t have to keep waiting for the next chapter. Excellent plot that keeps me checking if the story been updated and only two chapters at a time 😫!!! It has a great plot, suspenseful, excellent characters that you connect with and excited to see what happens next. Although this has taught me to check the story summary and make sure to read completed books only because I am not a patient person. Kudos to the author so far, just finish the book please!!!!