Four Mates and A Rogue
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As a rogue, Raven Blackwood has spent her life on the run, hunted by packs that see her as nothing more than a threat. Born from a forbidden union between an alpha and a rogue, she was cast out at birth, forced to survive in the shadows. But when Raven unknowingly crosses into Nightshade Pack territory, she doesn’t just trespass—she walks straight into destiny. Instead of being executed, she discovers she has not one, but four fated mates
Juanita
Desperately in need of an editor to put the chapters in chronological order and to reduce all the repetition. It reads quickly since many pages only have four lines of script on them. It reminded me of writing papers and using triple spacing in the body of the text to reach the goal of the required number of pages to complete the assignment. I found myself wondering if this was written by an AI program, based on the stilted and repetitive dialogue.
July 11, 2026

