Alpha's Last Minute Bride Opiniones

Amazing story actually a good story line not dragged just for the sake of alot of chapters like in other books they have 100 plus chapters and stories are repetitive but this story was amazing to the point and no dragging a a a a aa a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a. A a a

Was a cute book til the end. Author was obviously in a rush and failed to answer the Alpha death question at the end. Actually, most questions were left unanswered. So, I actually consider this one a waste of my time. But, I guess kudos?!?! At least the author sort of “finished” the book UNLIKE those authors that promise updates that never come. PS AlphaNovel… 80 words to complete a review takes stupidity to a whole new level… trust your readers, we can do a review with less verbiage that 80 words!

Story was good but lots of grammar errors also the ending seemed a little rushed. Daniel's aunt Emma and Mom drama could have been taken out to give Diana more storyline and add girth to the ending. Eve's stepmother drama with the diary was also unnecessary and could have been replaced with more Orpheus and her vampire siblings. I really liked the idea of the whole time travel theme but it could have had a better build up so the ending didn't end like you wanted to just be finished with the book already.

The story was good, but was a little hard to follow bc of all the grammatical errors & language snafus. You really need to use grammerly or get an editor. It would definitely make the story easier to follow. Please take this as constructive criticism and not someone trying to be mean. Otherwise your story was good. It was very creative and entertaining. The story was good, but was a little hard to follow bc of all the grammatical errors & language snafus. You really need to use grammerly or get an editor. It would definitely make the story easier to follow. Please take this as constructive criticism and not someone trying to be mean. Otherwise your story was good. It was very creative and entertaining.

The story was interesting but the language and grammar are pretty dreadful. It gets quite confusing with he/she and POV’s. The book morphs from werewolf to lycan to vampire. Then time travel gets thrown in. No “prime directive” in this universe. The main character time travels trying to fix things. Everyone ends up dead but with the time change are they really dead? I liked that there was story and not just rude pages endlessly. That was a real Plus. Also positive was it being a normal length book not endless.

Fabulous. I couldn’t put the book down. I had to read it to the end without stopping. I throughly enjoyed the characters especially Evangeline. She is a strong character mentally and physically. Thankfully she was able to use her Alpha powers to get everyone to follow her lead and carry through with her plans. I thought it wonderful that Daniel left himself a to do list for their future. Less fighting but hopefully still some fun in making up and learning about the other. The villain twist was surprising. I liked that the supernatural characters came together to win.

Loved the novel, and really wanted it to continue. There were mystery, intrigue and so much more. I enjoyed all aspects of the novel. Although fiction, there were aspects, I'm sure some people can relate to. It's a story of love and loss, which all of us know. I would have preferred some more, especially finding out what the new scenario of the alternate live will be. I can't wait to find out what might be next to read. We'll done

An engaging intersting story which nicely blends warewolf, vampire& time travel. Its a story which move forward with equally powered male & female leads. Subplots are carefully put not creating much confusions to the main story line. The subplots are actually making the story line intriguing. Author have kept unnecessary drama out of the context and have focused on continuing the story line in a proper way.All characters were creating needed impact. Angel and Dan found their happines in the end.

Very good. There is a satisfying ending. Unexpected magic. it is a Quick read. It was too short. Loved the romance. Words words words. And Words words words and. Words words words and. words, words words There should not have a minimum word limit. I’m not sure I’ll ever leave another review. words words words words and words. words. words. words. And more words. Apricot Baseball Chicken Dodge Elf Find Ghost Host Igloos Jayhawks Keep Life Mine Night

To me this seems like an original storyline, refreshing change from the runaway mate the unrequited love theme and the evil sister as a main character. I also really liked the lead characters (both human and their wolves(Roman and ivory)). However, I think the story and characters could have been developed more in the last 20 chapters. But at the same time I liked the length of the story, 57 chapters is great length. It took a lot of skill to wrap up that much story in the last few chapters.