Alpha Nicholas Opiniones

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

This novel was exciting and quite well written until I unlocked it, then it deteriorated rapidly. The characters especially the main ones became weak and the alpha especially became so changed as to be unrecognizable. The spelling and grammar became so ridiculous it changed some sentences completely. When you run up against misspelling frequently, as here, it ruins the flow of the story. Obviously careful editing has only been given to the hook but that doesn’t follow through the rest of the novel. As in this instance the book falls down because of the poor writing. There should be a refund given to those of us that have been duped, and the book withdrawn to be properly edited before being presented as a completed book.

It's a very interesting story and it's really a great read but the author needs to do a spell proofread on the things because there's a lot of spelling errors and for instance dispute instead of despite and she should really be reading what she's writing it's got a lot of interesting plot twists also so it can it is a very fine book but she sure needs to learn how to how to spell or how to spell and how to proofread

The story was good. The ending was incomplete I think. There were too many unanswered questions with too many of the major characters. According to my math, Aria should have turned 18 during this time and gotten her wolf and known Robbie was her mate. Finding Rosie's babies was kind of ignored I thought. I definately think that there she be another book dealing with and answering the loose ends and Iman questions. All in all a good read, but disappointed with the ending.

The novel so far is good. The Plot line is different and interesting, but the writing seems to go from really good to extremely childlike or translated from a different language. More consistent pattern of writing would be good. Also moving the story along a little faster. Overall I am really enjoying it. I am looking forward to seeing more about Tony’s background, Bonnie’s family being punished and Tony finding a new mate. I think it will be interesting to see how the story continues to develop.

I really like the novel because you can see the main character evolve and become stronger. The longest she’s with her mate. I like that the mate also has had issues and is trying to deal with them but he’s honest with her. It’s very unique that he’s had a child when he was only 12 mostly it’s the girls that end up like that it makes the story so much more interesting. I really like when you describe things.

I’m enjoying this story very much!!! Both Bonnie and Nicholas have had their share of heartache and abuse, so each one of them has multiple reasons to be hesitant about accepting the mate bond. Bonnie especially has doubts because she has never had the benefit of a loving and supportive family the way that Nicholas did. Each one of them is finding it difficult to openly express their true feelings, but as their bond continues to grow stronger, they are learning that they can trust and depend on each other to provide the emotional strength they will need to face a future together.