Reseñas de Alpha Damon

Sometimes the text is difficult to read because of too many errors, wrong or missed words. Sometimes whole sentences really do not make sense for me. So it's challenging, especially for me beeing not a native speaker ;-) Maybe a little editing would help? But, you know, once you've started, you want to know how it is going on... And I keep wondering how old the male lead is, because most of the time his acting is annoying, just like a spoiled brat who does't know what he wants. I just hope, he grows up as the book progresses. Don't loose hope! 👍

The plot of this story is great, but the grammatical errors are making it hard to read. I do not like how everyone is making it Siennas fault. Damon played her and then threatened her. What else was she supposed to do? He should be on his knees apologizing and making it right, but instead he continues to talk down about her and parade another woman around her. If they are mates, how is this even a thing? I’m going to continue reading because I’m starting to see progress in Damon, but I don’t know how much longer I will be reading it.

Interesting story so far, despite all the typos and grammatical errors! I can understand the storyline and the direction in which it's heading! I like Sienna's character, but I also like Damon's character as well! I can see that despite their differences and ranks the two of them are destiny to lead together. After all, they were mated for a reason, despite Damon's arrogance! But I believe that he's coming around to see and accept her for who she is... which is a very strong will, no nonsense woman! I only wish that we could read more about their wolves. I can't wait to read more...

Love this book, thee twist and turns. They are creating a great back story with strength for the present. Presentation is great with more to come. The characters keep you on your toes wanting more, and wanting to see what is going to happen next. I like how there is confrontation, confusion, and love for it all. I really like was this author is trying to do in this book. I can not wait to finish it to see what happens

I am really enjoying this book so far. Admittedly there was a brief moment I thought that there would be little development appearing to just go around in circles and nothing would change, similar to so many books currently available. Thankfully the story line moved in a new direction and continued to evolve and develop away from the usual never ending loop and became very enjoyable again. I look forward to reading the rest I just wish it didn’t take so long watching ads and checking in for coins to read.

Love the story. Just started reading it and it has grabbed my attention and is keeping me really interested. I’m curious to see what is going to happen in the relationship triangle that seems to be developing. It would be nice to see Sienna make a new friend or two. There seems are a few grammar mistakes. Also some contextual confusions that made me go back and reread to figure it out. But a good proof reader can help with this. But so far there are not as many in some of the other books I have read here online. Just finished. Sooo disappointed in the ending. Seems unfinished. What about the war?? Isn’t that conflict all that this led up to?? And what about sienna’s dead come back to life mother? Why even bring her into the story?

So far so good. Slow start. Not to much depth to story thus far. The main character appears to be dark and brooding. Safe to guess there will be some remembrance portions to look forward to, to give insight for why his is the way he is. Leading female role is very supportive to the main character, with lots to be seen on character development. These two characters are significant to each others lives; best friends, lovers, then ex lovers just to become lovers again

This is a good story so far. It's different from all the rest that i've read on here.It starts off as the alphabet just straight up, rode mean.And cocky and unlikable. I honestly think the beginning started off without giving us the knowledge of their background.And how close they really were to lead up to the point they're at now. Kind of missus. The whole love become about through all of it. Almost didn't even realize they grew up together and they were friends. And close friends at that, until chapter is in better than that has a good story. Line, I'm interested in Reading more. I'm just hoping it's not going to be exactly what i'm thinking.It's gonna end like if there's a new twist to it.Somewhere?Because i'm trying to figure out how it's gonna go from here.Besides, they're gonna get together, raise their kid together.And fight a battle. And that her and her daughter's gonna have some powers, extra strength.Hopefully, somewhere in there is gonna be different. As honestly, i'm tired of reading almost the same stories was a little different. Way to go, because each one of these books is like almost thirty dollars to read it.It's crazy.I'm almost tempted to make this my last one because of it.By the great up with your book, keep your novel going. So far yours is the best one that I've read cuz. It's totally different so far. It starts off pretty quick. Wish you'd have just gave a little bit more background to lead up to it to give me more of understanding and a little more detail.That should give you a full picture like of what they look like.In the scenery, the background had to come about. Basically just more detailed. Some parts are confusing

I like the book now. but there were some chapters that made me hate Damon and his macho ways. I don’t like people being mistreated and less of all a woman by a man when he is more powerful. So there were lots of moments in which I had to force myself to continue reading. Today when we try to be equal, I can’t believe that someone write things that go against other individual. I hope the mistreatment will stop

Great novel! It started a bit slow and some parts would be done without but all in all it is turning into a great read. As I am towards the end, I appreciate the plot twist, I just hope the author stays true to the orginal vision. These review requests for at least 80 words to get 50 coins seems a bit extreme but as I do not like to pay for coins a person's got to do what a person's got to do.