Abandoned by My Alpha, Carrying His Heir Opiniones

I really like this book. When I first started reading this novel, I was getting lost in some of y the words, then I realized I needed to remember the key board. Like me the writer might have fast fingers to or gets to thinking faster than they type. It has been a very engaging book so far. If I ever get over the fact that I want to reach in and slap the crap out of the Alpha, then this book might be a lot more fun for me. LOL thank you for listening to my opinion. It is a good book.

Someone needs to go through and fix all the errors to words used and how they were used. There are so many edits that are needed. I had to keep guessing what the correct words were. It would make the story so much easier to read. I liked the story and characters which is why I kept reading. But wow it was difficult trying to read. Please have someone fix all the errors. It’s just hard to read it.

I enjoyed the premise of the story but it was a hard read. The spelling mistakes, the grammar mistakes, the randomly added words etc, made it seem as if it was written in another language and then translated by a bot and then published without having been further proof checked. The book also suddenly comes to an end without any resolution as if there are additional chapters missing or that it is still being written. This book with be much better if finished and edited after being proof read

Excellent story can’t wait for the next chapter. Alaric and Elena what a love story with some many twist and Hydra and Cecelia and Victorian with Diego and Alejandro adding to the turmoil. Always the elders and their secrets. Special wolf that needs it to be protected for its own good. Andrew in the friend zone should go for Hazel instead. Mara and Lysander should get their forever after happy ending. Hydra should be with someone like Alejandro both are equally disgusting.

I'm really still deciding on this book. Would love to read it to the end but it really just doesn't keep the reader intrigued enough to come back. After .so many chaoter some plot or story should have formed already. Also the writing is not the best but I rruelly hope that the main characters story get to take some shape in the next few chapters. I hope Alaric gets the shock of his life for being so ugly with his Luna

I am enjoying this book. I am truly starting to. wonder if the alpha has a. reason. to why he is acting like that to elara. And I can't stand. the so called mistress.

What the h☆☆☆!!!! First I have to deal with all the typos, repeated sentences, and feeling like this book is a crappy translated edition!! Second, seriously you end the damn book like that!!! For 2 frickens days I've read this book and you end it with congrats your bond is severed!!!!!!!!!! That's it no let's get back together, no comeuppance on Hydra, no telling grandpa he's gonna get his wish for a great grandson!! I hope people read this review and realize this book is trash. I'm so disappointed, I spent an extra $30 to read this one and it ends like this!!!!

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