THE VAMPIRE'S CHOSEN ONE Opiniones

I keep reading because I want to know what happens, but the writing is repetitive and not put together well in some places. It needs to be edited because some of the paragraphs are out of place and doubled up. Then there are some contradictions in the writing. The story line is thrown together quickly but drags because of the repetition in the use of certain words like it’s filler that adds nothing to the story other than trying too hard to sound deep and gothy. It really just seems like the author was trying too hard.