The Billionaire's Substitute Bride Opiniones

Beautiful story about unconventional love. Allen is such an amazing character the fact that unlike most me leads he is not hypocritical when it comes to cheating. He is firm about hating it and not being into it. I just wish we could have explored the idea of Mia going back to school to pursue medicine. I just love how he loved her without properly identifying that what he feels us love. Great couple that seems to long for each other

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The story was so good and I felt so connected with the characters it had such a good twisted ending and I’m glad that the characters got a good happy ending. I hope that there will be a continuation of the book as I would love to read it and see. I would love to see Mia and Allen’s relationship to develop and see what their life is like now that they are actually married and see what their life future holds for them

Let's see where I can start at, the story line is great, the plot twist was also great, however I did wish for the book to be longer, I also would have liked a little more spicy scens, also it would have been great if his mother tried a pop in to meet Mia, and for them to find out they would be starting a family. Other than that it was a good book to read, started it yesterday and finished in a day.

Although the storyline is good, its too slow paces and dragging unnecessary. Allen' s brother's character also was so unnecessary. He didnt have any real contribution in the story...Alan spent a whole lot of time at work, there was about his work. A loy of things really didnt make sense,like why would Mia not go back to school since money wasnt an issue anymore, why would her aunt Vera come all the way to the restuarant but not make any real effort to achive what she wanted. She didnt even try to manipulate Mia

Short and sweet! Loved this story a lot. Believable drama, except maybe the reason for the marriage and the shower scene. Made Allen appear weak in that scene. There is room to expand on the story without drawing out unnecessary scenes and repeating episodes. This is a rare story where I actually wanted more action. For instance wanted more to happen with the thieving Aunt. She should have suffered more for stealing Mia's money. And why didn't Mia not return to school or do something other than lay around and sleep. Great short story but plenty of room for more!

Nice rags to riches story, the story flow was good. I found the author had a poor understanding of English grammar, which was distracting at times. Although the story itself was well conceived with a debatable unpredictable twist at the end, it was still an enjoyable read . There could have been more character development and some of the details were missing in the action sequence, I.e Mia’s escape lacked details of her picking up the cat Bella before hopping into the taxi to go with her friend, yet she grabs Bella when leaving her friends house to return to her husband.

I loved it.kia was an awful friend and yes Allen needs to take care of her. A true friend would have been happy for Mia no matter what bad things may have been happening in her life. I was surprised that Sophie seemed to have changed, but I was glad that she and Mia didn’t become friends. That would not have seemed right. Kia and Allen deserves to be happy with each other and if Kia had been a true friend she may have ended up with Max.

I realy enyoed reading this novel. Refreshing is the first word that comes to my mind. The author wrote lovely story that kept my attention from begining to end. She didn't make the mistake that is common: didn't try to make story longer with endless complications which result in loosing interest in the story. This story holds everything it needs to make you read it in one breath. You read it in one go and enjoy reading every second. Good job! Thank you.

I actually enjoyed this reading. It was kinda short compared to other pieces but enjoyable nonetheless. It ended with a HEA but in a cliffhanger sort of way. I wonder if it will be updated with a different conclusion. There were certain issues that never came to a head. I would like to see something like an unexpected baby surprise. There was no kidnapping but there was a whole lot of deceit. I was actually waiting for the kidnapping, which is typical for a flow in these storylines. The author went a different direction. I will admit the change was refreshing.