Reseñas de El Secreto Costero del Billonario

One of the best stories I have found on this platform. The characters are well developed and there are relatively few mistakes. I did find that the place names confused me geographically. Some of the time the story seemed to be based in America, at others it was far eastern and the travel times between them were completely unbelievable. I would also comment that start and end of the flash backs could be marked better as there were points where it was difficult to define them.