My Stepfather, My Ruin Opiniones

The story was good. In need of mild editing, but overall well written. I would have liked to see some resolutions for some of the background characters. What happened to her father exactly? What about Talia and Sebastian? It would have been good to have their stories resolved. I didn’t care too much for the sexual stuff, it was too much for me. I truly was here for the story and to read how the story evolved. That was what had me drawn into the book.

I absolutely loved this novel. It was sexy, a little out there in social norms, but I won't change a thing about this story. You get pulled in by the chemistry between Nicole and Tristan. You feel a little sorry for Lily, but you end up rooting for the couple to stand together and make it. Very good BRAVO. I will read this author again. Very colorful in writing and keeps the action going. You will not be disappointed with this writer

Love the story, well done. Every events, situations were vividly expressed, written as if I’m personally present witnessing all of the acts. It would have been more realistic if Nicole gets pregnant along the way after making love without protection. The story should have ended with the couple in their mansion watching their kids playing around. Also, on the other hand, a little more info on Talia & Sebastian relationship. A little story on Other women for Tristan’s friends, Nico, Julian could have made the friendships deeper. Thank you author for this, I’m glued until finished.

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I enjoyed the story. It had a good mix of different dynamics that kept me hooked. The writing wasn't always the best but the way that the characters were developed and made you care about them and find out what happened next made up for it. I enjoyed some of the twists of the story, character development of each of the main character's friends and of course, how the relationship started and developed to a story of love, not just just by the end.

Cute story. You really root for the main characters even though it’s taboo. There are some minor typos but none of the story line discrepancies that seem common in these platforms. It would be interesting to read stories of Julian, Seb and Nico finding love. While this story started from Nicole’s perspective, I appreciate getting Tristan’s point of view. It was sweet watching him change to put her first in his life. I look forward to reading more from this author.

I think that this novel had a steamy sexual inturludes and passionate bond building dialog and just enough drama to keep you intrested I do think that the reveal of Tristan and Nichole should have been just a little more drawn out to keep a interest highs and lows growing more intriguing it was to simple and easy guess what was next to come however it left me wanting for more story line I needed to spend me more time me with the characters

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I really liked the novel and their story. Even though the main characters are Nicole and Tristan, I think it was missing information what about the rest... Like Rhea, Clara, Talia, Julian, Sebastian, Nico and even his grandfather meeting Nicole properly towards the end. Like I said the story is good but it was missing. Then again it had a nice ending for the main characters. Throughout the story I like that it gives a little suspense of wanting to know what's go8ng to happen next.

This novel seems to keep me guessing. This is keeping me coming back to read chapter after chapter in one sitting making it hard for me to put my phone down and get any other work that needs to be done taken care of. In my opinion this novel could be a little more detailed with the descriptive words but also it’s not too far off. I am enjoying this app more than games for now because reading helps keep my mind working!