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How to Hide the Mafia Boss' Child Opiniones

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Michelle

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Enjoying your writing and storyline. Can’t wait to dive in to find out what happens next. Thalia really had it rough growing up after her mother was killed. She seems so well adjusted by the time she is raising her own daughter. So happy that she was able to live a relatively normal life after she ran away. It made my heart happy when Luciano (or is it Lucien) found his former guard and was introduced to his daughter. Will his father ruin everything or will they rise above?

November 1, 2025
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Megan Butler

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I enjoying this read. I think the characters are sweet and will be interesting to see where this goes. He's a big Mafia boss so he can't hide out with thalidomide for ever. Time to get back in the real world and see what happens next. His father is going to be pissed about it. But he's bound to want a relationship sooner or later. He didn't go soft he's just born that way. The daughter is very sweet too.

July 17, 2026
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Jay

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Nice story that had lots to offer the reader. I liked the characters and how the story unfolded throughout the family relationships and such. I would have liked a bit more drama at the end but it was good anyways. Normal lose ends that were not tied up which is good. The beginning was really good and set up well. The connection between the main characters was great and set the story. So all in all a good read.

July 14, 2026
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Kiwi Griffin

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This story was amazing!! I loved all of the twists and turns of it! The danger and intrigue were superbly done! There's something about a mafia story that I really like. The drama of it and all it entails are everything i love in a novel. The characters were so real to me. And the endearing grandfather figure on the Amari Coast was so sweet. The way it was described was so beautifully done. A place I would love to visit

July 10, 2026
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Clementina Francisco

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This novel is absolutely amazing and keeps me on the edge of my seat with every chapter. I felt so much for the female lead after everything she suffered from her abusive parents and being forced into the mafia world. Watching her fall in love with the mafia leader, become pregnant, and then disappear for four years to protect her child made the story even more emotional. The reunion between the gangster and his child was beautiful and heartwarming. The book is full of love, pain, suspense, and unforgettable moments. I couldn't stop reading and can't wait to see what happens next!

July 8, 2026
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Mily Costello

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I’ve enjoyed this story so far although I find it sad that the female main character kept her pregnancy from her Love interest and lied to her daughter about her father. It made me happy when the daughter went the truth and was so open to having a father and excited that she had a daddy like all the other kids. Hopefully, the female main character learned her lesson about Harmon’s little white lies that aren’t so harmless nor so little.

July 7, 2026
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User_3231904152

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It was good. Not to much Madia stuff included, more of just love story with dysfunctional families, but it was an entertaining read. I feel like the Mafia part made it a little less believable when the fathers turned into softies at the end. A bit more character development or explanation would have been nice. Needed more background or explanation. Wish it would have been a bit longer or longer chapters. Needs to be proof read for errors, odd names, Erina? And repeat paragraphs. All in all a good read that didn't drag along and definitely kept my interest.

July 7, 2026
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Char

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This was a cute love story. Thalia was tough physically but very naive and immature. She was only 18 though. She didn't let people bully her but she had a hard time confronting someone on an emotional level. Luciano was the new Don of the Mafia. Ufortunately, his father Emiliano, the previous Don, had a hard time relinquishing control. He thought the only way to be successful was to be tough, mean, ruthless, uncaring, heartless, and emotionless. Don't you dare show any love. This story shows that true love wins over family. It may even bring family closer together.

July 2, 2026
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Sam

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Im loving this novel. The mischief and snark is so entertaining. I love the reality checks and misunderstandings which makes the story so interesting. I hope they have their happy ever after. His dad sounds like bad news. Loving the family happiness. The both deserve happiness after having such tough childhoods. Lucille and Grandpa can be happy too. A really fun story so far. Thank you for the entertainment I can't wait for the end.

June 29, 2026
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Foxy

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Sometimes some of these books on these types of sights are too slow to get to the good stuff and too long and ongoing dragging it out. I really like this title as it kept me interested wanting to get to the next chapter. I like that the woman is able to fight and isn’t weak. Although not done reading yet I know the conclusion is coming soon and won’t drag on. I look forward to seeing what else this author has written.

June 29, 2026
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