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The history so far is captivating but has many spelling errors and some inconsistencies, I don't know if the original story is in English but if it isn't it should have a better translator. English is not my language but I prefer to read in English especially spicier scenes and for now I've been enjoying those scenes but ends up getting confusing because it has so many written errors. I'll keep reading more because I'm curious to know how the main characters will end up!

This book needs a LOT of work. The grammar is awful and many sentences don't make sense. The concept is good but the writing skills definitely need work. And the ending is HORRIBLE!!!! I'm disappointed that I spent a couple weeks reading this. One chapter mentioned Genie receiving a call from her dad. Then she's unconscious for two weeks? Why? What happened? You don't fall into a coma and not find out why. Hitting you head is not an excuse. And what about the call? Follow through with your ideas. Make sure your words make sense

I have really enjoyed reading this novel so far. Unfortunately between the grammical errors and some minor details that get mixed up in the story line I can see how someone could get lost. I just looked past it and rolled with it, most of the time I understood what the writer meant. I do look forward to reading more novels . I enjoy reading or listening to the stories while doing chores or falling asleep. It's a good way to relax or pass the time.

Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already. Very good book. Wish they they would tell their parents already.