HIS LUNA BY MISTAKE, A MOTHER BY FATE Bewertungen

The initial chapters had a ton of blank pages. And this novel is NOT finished. Where is the rest of the story? I need to know what happens to Aria and her children. What of Alpha Kael? Did Luna Beatrice kill Darius or was it Alicia so her son could take over? Too many questions and not enough answers. Let me know how this ends, please. Please. Please, please, please, please, por favor, pzhaluysta, any time soon!

This story was confusing and had no end several of the chapters had many many extra pages although I liked the book overall I'm disappointed at the ending and the waste of several pages and all the ads I had to watch just to get to the point where there was no ending to find out what happened to Aria and her kids. Maybe there will be a second book but the chapters should not include many many extra pages. Not sure I would read another book by this author.

I am enjoying this story so far. However, I am finding issue with the chapter layout. Almost every chapter has at least 10 pages that are blank. I am not sure if that is intentional, or an editing malfunction, but it does not look good for the overall layout of the book. If the book is revised so the pages have text throughout the book, this book will be so much better. Hopefully the storyline continues to hold my attention.

I can’t give a true opinion because I’m waiting to see if it all connects…well if it actually does. Too many authors disappoint when it comes to this. So I’m just waiting…but I need 80 words so here we go…. It's supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Even though the sound of it is something quite atrocious If you say it loud enough you'll always sound precocious Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I Um-dittle-ittl-um-dittle-I