Banished Luna returns with Sextuplets Rezensionen

This is an interesting novel although quite repetitive sometimes. I feel like most of the chapters are the same. I feel sorry for felicity because of the way her mate Markus treated her. He should have done a thorough investigation before he banned her. I do not like the way her pack member treated her and her sister in law who orchestra the whole incident of the photo. Marcus should have listened to his beta. I really want Felicity to get on with Avery.

Good story and characters. Could have been less chapters. Didn't like all the spacing between sentences. That was distracting and made it boring constantly having to flip the pages. Lost the energy of the story at times, those spaces would have been better at the times of suspense not throughout. But overall it was good, characters had substance. There is a duplicate chapter as well. That frustrated me as you pay by the chapter. Overall, good story. Might look for others by this author

Its pretty good so far! Im only on the 38th chapter, so I hope this keeps the pace. Its an easy read, but I wish there were more than 5 sentences per page. I also hope that Felicia ends up staying in the new pack. But then, once the kids become of age, she should return and take over her old pack. Then she can banish that nasty sister and her trifling friend because it was all their fault. Then make Markus grovel at her feet...lol

Was so happy at the end but repeat parts were boring to read over and over . The babys to thoughts at five were cute and the way she talked and expressing how the little moment were and how she felt about them were exactly how I felt and seen my own babies grow.. my babies Dad is very tough and strong but deep down he is a huggable tender loveable teddy bear at heart.. would love to share with other when I can..

This is a wonderful love story full of drama and emotion! It is well worth the read… the only real negative is the apparent tendency to stretch the chapters, such as listing the six children’s names over and over through out the narrative. As well as the repeating statements from the ending of a chapter at the beginning of the following chapter. The book does not have to long as long as the plot is completely developed. But I’m sure the APP may require specific number of words and/or chapters.

In the beginning I liked the story but then there’s so much on repeat which made the story very boring to read. The writer mixing up the timeline and writing against the narrative several times which makes the story confusing and as a reader loses interest. The jealousy is off putting because I have read many stories with the jealousy. There’s must be some story without all the she wolves jealousy…good luck in the future with your writing

Excellent story. Great how you orchestrayed the banishment. Very sad, but I can believe that can happen. Is glad Brenda was taken into custody again. Lala must also be hanged. Loved the separate characters of the kiddies. Loved how Avery loved Felicia all the time, how she was just accepted into the new pack, all the help from Lila and Clara and the other pack menbers during pregnancy and after the kiddies were born. And totally loved the reconciliation between Marcus and Felicia...

Omg! This is the best novel I have ever read from beginning to the end, they all made it thru as a family nd this is so awesome, hope there's more novels like this for me to readd...congratulations to the author for making this the best read ever i have enjoyed it so much nd it made me cry, laugh nd cheer! I may end up reading this novel again, its about time the sister got what she deserved for doing something to her sister in law just bcuz she was jealous nd thinking that she was powerful enuff to ruin something like that nd her husband for what he done he owned up to his mistakes nd he did everything to fix it with his wife nd his 6 kids

Loved it, even though a couple of chapters repeated themselves. Just wish I knew what happened to Lala. There was no mention of her. Glad they got their happy ever after and so glad Avery found Serena, so he wouldn't be alone. Would be great to have even a few chapters following up , with the wedding and the nee baby(babies). Love everything about werewolf/lycan tales. If only I could find that kind of love ❤️

I was upset when you decided to have her go back to Markus, because I wanted her and Avery to be together. Then you gave him someone too. You let them to still be family and that was awesome thank you. You had me laughing, crying, and angry all at the same time. You are an awesome writer. Please keep writing stories. I would have liked to find out how many babies she was going to have next. I also would have liked to have Avery and his woman to get married and have a family too. Maybe that can be another storyline.