Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable Bewertungen

I am genuinely enjoying this book the FMC is a strong woman who knows her worth and is willing to go after what she deserves. There is a perfect amount of drama and juicy details that keep you guessing and wanting more. I find myself super eager to read the next chapter. Can’t wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds and how deep the love between Cecilia and Sebastian will be (if it goes that direction)

That’s a very awkward place to end. Where is the rest of the story. There are some repeated words and paragraphs throughout that need correction. Also some of the wording is not phrased appropriately. There are also some him/her mix ups within the story that made things confusing. Overall the story line is good. Cecelia having cici slap herself and then slapping her didn’t fit with Cecelia’s personality within the rest of the book. I hope to see the rest of the story

Wow amazing work on the story of this piece and I am very impressed with your dedication and professionalism and your work in the process and I hope to be part in it soon as I get a job and get my degree I am so happy for your dedication to this piece and your dedication and commitment and your commitment and your commitment and your commitment and your commitment and your commitment and dedication I will always love and cherish

The novel has been quite engaging so far. Alpha Javier, repenting and trying to be all over get her back is completely unreasonable. He has no sense of remorse. He is just too much. He feels like he’s entitled and she belongs to him, which is stupid so he should be punished for what he did. Sebastian just needs to get a hold of himself. Seems to be fighting himself over his emotions. Just let it go! And Leonard is pretty much done. Cecilia is a fighter! Go girl

This novel, Abandoned Luna, Now Untouchable, is a very interesting read. Cecilia is not having the best of times, but she is always coming out smelling like a rose. Her husband Alpha Xavier is really something else and his mother is even worse. Then you throw in Miss White and watch out! Alpha Sebastian is hard to figure out. He does not seem to want to be anywhere near Cecilia but always seems to have a six sense when it comes to her It will be very interesting to see what happens next

I’m super sorry I persevered with this so many times had hints of other novels so clearly plagiarism characters names same plot same AI at its best. Keep the sucker paying coin with just enough tantalizing juicy twists to the plot. This novel went on so many tangents and at the end which at least was happy a super natural being was behind the one pulling the strings. Right. It is seriously the most BS I’ve ever read. But parts were really good but then it would go south.dont go there

Story is ok, but the chapters are way too short. It’s drawn out just to make you spend way more you’d ever pay for the actual book! This app is looking more and more like a rip off. Stories with over 200 chapters just to keep people spending more to read what happens and finish the story. Then you get to end and are pissed at how much you spent or all the time you wasted for free coins to get a mid tale.

Captivating! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit Luvvit

Interesting novel. It has a good storyline. This novel does not jump between perspectives much, so it is not hard to follow. The characters are very well developed. I can't wait to see what comes next. This is a decent author. The chapters are shorter than preferred, and they require more coins than preferred to unlock new chapters, but it is still a good enough read to keep at it. This novel is a page turner. Just keep on swimming.

Im addicted to this story and I am flying through the chapters. I do wish the chapters were longer but it has me completely hooked regardless. I adore Alpha Sebastian and truly Need Cecelia to admit her real feelings about him! Like yesterday! He also needs to be completely honest with her about his own feelings. He needs to be clear and direct! She can’t read his mind and only knows what has been portrayed in the past! She has the wrong opinion of him from the beginning and is blind to what his every action means.