A Rogue For The Alpha Twins Bewertungen

I am still reading the novel but I am loving the plot of the story so far. Can’t seem to get enough of the twins teasing their mate. I love that it’s not like other novel where they mistreat their mate at the start only to find out what and who they are to them. It has a nice mix of cute sometimes innocent romance as well as a nice balance of spicy romance. Love, love the novel would definitely recommend.

Very cute book. I do wish there was more conflict and passionate scenes. I like the MLs, but wish they had a bit more depth to their personalities. I still can't figure out which ML has green eyes and which one has blue eyes. At this point I'd like to hear about the council and what they are going to do about how the FL was treated by her family and former pack. It would also be great if there was something special about th FL, because right now she is average and booring.

The story is great, but I am a fast reader, so sometimes I feel like I am spending more time with ads than the actual story! But I want to keep reading, so I just deal with it!! The Alpha's seem to be different enoughnow, and now that Sophia knows who is who, it seems to add more movement to the story! I am excited to get to the Coronation ceremony so the three of them have more interaction amongst themselves!

So far so good. I like that this is a fast pace story and it is completed and we’re only looking at about 100 chapters versus seven or 800 chapters where it says ongoing ongoing ongoing, but I am really really looking forward to when Miss Sophia and the boys finally get together. Sure some trauma is getting ready to happen but I think they can handle it anyway looking forward to the entirety of the book as I said so far so good.

The story has an interesting premise and strong potential, especially with the dynamic between the two alpha characters. Overall, the storyline is enjoyable and keeps the reader engaged. However, the female characters sometimes come across as overly naive, which makes their decisions and reactions feel less believable. The biggest issue is the large number of spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the story. These errors frequently interrupt the reading experience and make some passages difficult to follow. A thorough proofreading and editing would greatly improve the story.

Hauska ja äärimmäisen mukaansa tempaava kirja. Täynnä tunteita laidasta laitaan. Ei voi lopettaa lukemista. Aluksi tuntui oudolta yhden naisen ja miehen välinen side, voiko se edes onnistua. Mitä pidemmälle olen lukenut sitä luonnollisemmalta se tuntuu. Näiden kolmen välinen todella kuumottava side tuntuu siltä kuin olisin itse paikalla. En malta odottaa että saan lukea kappaleita lisää ja lisää. Haluan tietää miten tarina päättyy ja miten he tulevat elämään elämäänsä yhdessä vai tulevatko he? Tapahtuuko vielä jotain mikä kääntää asiat eri suuntaan.

Right now I am unsure about the novel. It has many grammical and spelling errors. Sometimes to the detriment of the story flow. However, it seems to be a decent story and concept so far. I would like at this point to read more of the alphas point of views also but overall it has been a decent story line and plot. I am not sure yet if this is a book I would share. I will say if you are a stickler for grammar and publication mistakes do not read. You will just become frustrated, but like I said if not it is a decent story so far.

Sophia, the Rouge, for all of two days. Life was not kind to her. Her parents treated her like an unwanted stepchild. She did all the work in the house, was bullied at school and at home. Then finally at the ripe old age of eighteen, she was summoned to pack meeting, her parents front and center, all pack members present, she was officially kicked out of the pack because ahe was an omega!! She was saved, from being killed by real rouges, after two days of running to safety..This pack had two alphas, who turned out to be her mates. Nice short story that ends with some questions. Why the long descriptions of places and things, they took up so much time!? What did her mates did to her old pack, alpha and parents who hurt her in the pass. And what happened to Becky with all her treats? I give this book a 3 out of 5. Too much wasted space. We have to pay for these chapters! Author I like your story, it only needs a better ending.

The first 50 or so chapters of this fic are great. But then the tone, structure, and cadence changed and I found myself skipping whole chapters. Which makes me feel like a lot of this was a waste of my resources. I was honestly just looking forward to finishing it by the end so I could move on. The plot and characters were great and set up well, but they stopped progressing and the story became stagnant. It’s too bad.

Moves a no little slowly but good characters. I wish there was a way to speed up the narrator because she's a bit slow. I can't wait for the kick ass for Sophia's former pack and especially her parents. I hate when packs treat their omegas poorly because without them absolutely nothing would get done in. The Omega's are the ones that cook, clean and do the manual labor and therefore allow everyone else the time to train and do the things that protect and support the pack