Rezensionen zu FATED TO BE WITH YOU

I enjoyed reading this book, but it could definitely use a proof reading as some paragraphs need to be read twice to be understood. It was a good enough story. The idea was quite refreshing. But the writing needs some work / practice. Some chapters are pretty much just repeating descriptions that don't really make sense. And others feels like a rush job. There are some plot holes, but usually small ones. But in the end it feels like the author just changed their mind, so twisted the storyline to fit the new goal. Unfortunately the twists don't always make sense. I would read again, but slower and without using so many coins.

The story line is really good. The way the author just throws new things in like its been part of the story the whole time is frustrating. I am the type of person that finishes what I started so I will continue reading. But if I see another book by the same author I would probably skip it. Again the basis of the book is great just needs to be told better. Read this book if you're bored.

At about 40 chapters in, I am hooked enough to continue reading. I’m hoping the story will start getting adventurous. At this point I’m looking forward to the characters revealing themselves and coming together in the inevitable good against evil story line. There are a lot of typos so I wonder if it’s poor editing or if it has been translated from another language into English. I have to read more chapters to give a proper review.