Entangled with the Billionaire
- Genre: Billionaire/CEO
- Autor: Symplyayisha
- Kapitel: 101
- Status: Abgeschlossen
- Altersfreigabe: 18+
- 👁 54.7K
- ⭐ 8.4
- 💬 0
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Mia thought the best way to get revenge against her terrible ex was to get sexual pleasure from someone else. Preferably, a stranger! So she stalked the sexiest man she could find at the party. Once he cornered her, She made him a deal. Mia had no idea that the man she made a deal with was a possessive Billionaire who could make or break her. He wanted more after their passionate night together and decided she was going to be Entangled with him for life.
judith
It is very wordy & could do with better editing. Sounds like it is translated from another language. The story isn’t bad & atleast the names of the characters aren’t changing from chapter to chapter. Rather slow for getting the plot across ans meanders. So far no repeat of chapters thankfully. A good editor would tighten the direction and the tone of the conversation between characters. There is a real difference between written and spoken English. The conversations and the plot need tightening up.
July 6, 2026
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