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My Brother, My Mate Reviews

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Kendra

Review after half of the novel

Honestly I am enjoying this story a lot. There are so many twists and turns that sometimes I can not keep up with them and I have to go back and reread the same chapter over and over again. Very well written you should be very very proud of how it is coming a long. I hope you will keep writing because I will keep reading all of the stories you write. Again such an amazing story so far keep it up

May 8, 2024
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Melissa Burk

Review after half of the novel

This book is something of an enigma for me. I like the story when 5he main characters are together because I know they are not brother and sister. The other background story is not letting them spend very much time together when they are conscious. I think if there was a way for the author to bridge the story they have with them spending more time together it would be an even better story. I am waiting to see what happens for them next.

May 8, 2024
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Christina Reynolds

Review after half of the novel

This book started slow in the beginning it was confusing to follow but I stuck with It not sure where the author was trying to go with the story I was still intrigued even if it was little bit all over the place the characters seem to be solid the plot was consistent. Its still slow but growing on me more the author needs to proof read alottle better or the language barrier isn't as great as could be I'm invested I will finish the read.

May 7, 2024
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Beverly Jean Legg

Review after half of the novel

Great story so many twists I hope she and her mate get together soon... .... ...I am having thoughts about the Dr now is she working with the guy from her old pack that's working with rouge's... ...... ... . . . . . . . Dunn is mean. . . . Judd is funny. Sex is hottttt..... . .. . . . . . ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️💖💖💖💖💖💖 ❣️. .

May 3, 2024
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Jamie Wilson

Review after the novel completion

The writing is very poorly done, story line is very sexy. It repeats a lot of things. The estrus was so bad for Tracy that her “brother” had sex with her while she was unconscious that is horrible she has been through so much and for her mate to rape her while she is unconscious is so very sad and wrong! Such a wonderful woman to have that happen to her she needs love and compassion in her life not that! But all in all a good novel!!!

May 1, 2024
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Thuly Sugar Tsobolo

Review after half of the novel

In so invested in this novel... its a pity i have to wait for 1 hour to read the next chapter.. if it waz up to me i would read non stop.. i cant even put my phone down the way i like tuis novel... i would like for osborn to reveal himself to tracy and tell her everything before its too late for both of them.. and according to my thinking i think there are dangerous people that will harm tracy.. i cant wait for the finishing chapter.. how it will end.. keep up the good work on your novel .its very fascinating to read such fictions.. where u can relate somehow somewhere.and if its possible can u atleast make the chapters long so that atleast if spend coin it can worth the coins that im spending.. the chapters are short and expensive.. but very interesting to read.. and i dont like kincaid n his daughter..they seem too dodgy for my liking.. my soul doesnt sit well when they are around.😁😁. .i just hope the book will not disappoint with the ending. .couse im already invested in osborn n tracy to have a happily ever after .and i cant wait for kincaid to be found guilty of killng tracy's parent.. and be prosecuted or excercuted.. for all the crime he has committed.. And how come this beta kincaid have more power that the alpha himself.. its like he will bend to the beta velel wen even there is some trouble or mis understanding in the park..its like hes the alpha. Maybe thats y hes doing all of these things nd still get away with it.. no one thas the balls to stop him.. the all talk about proof before they kill him or sentence him.....and tracy should learn to

April 27, 2024
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Bria Prescott

Review after half of the novel

This book is good. I hope the she realizes that Osborn really isn’t her brother and that he really cares about her. I just wish she knew what happened when she was in heat and I can’t wait to see her reaction when she finds out. Also where is Lisa at and what happened to her. I am so engrossed in this book that I can’t put it down and I love reading it. I can’t wait to see what happens next

April 27, 2024
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Gen Aemisegger-Mark W.

Review after half of the novel

This book is very intriguing.A little slow running. But that might be how the author is making sure that everything is understood and how it is placed in the book and the timing that it takes place.. The author is very thorough in her writing. She is a very talented author. I wish her only the best and I hope she continues with her writing. She has a talent that I personally don't have. I wish her joy happiness, prosperity in her writing and her personal life.

April 26, 2024
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Samona Dawson

Review after the novel completion

The book starts off very catchy. You are lured in by the story of the girl. It is the typical abuse or bullying. They you find out why the bullying starts. You wonder about the alpha who happens to be the brother. The question rises as to why he treats her as such. Next is the girls family history and reason for the punishment she receive from everyone. Once the brother becomes of age it is established that his sister is his mate. Things happen to keep them apart. In the end they make it through.

April 26, 2024
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Cool Boy

Review after half of the novel

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April 26, 2024